CayCay Godwin Poet Rhyme

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Baby Face Scowl

YOU? Why are YOU up in here, all on the prowl,
looking closely at me, causing me to scowl?
DUDE, can't you see anger set in my jowls?

I just arrived brand new, so I still remember
how my last life ended one cold September
when someone - YOU - forgot to yell timber!
Are you listening, seeing this face, witnessing
my expression of disdain as loathing clad?

You scad ... what, huh .. what DID new Mom call you?
NOT grandad, no - no, that cannot be true.
You and me, related .. that I cannot do.

The angels must have placed this wee doodad
on the wrong heavenly infant launchpad.
Oh, me, just great - I'm already living mad.

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Jennifer Proxenos June 3, 2019 at 12:44 PM CayCay - your wonderful imagination gives us such pleasurable elation - your funny hat is on - related - no, that I cannot do, angels that that placed this doodad in the wrong infant launchpad - this is hysterically funny - you should enter this into a baby competition! Hugs and love Jennifer.

Nette Onclaud May 15, 2019 at 1:44 PM lol, if only babes could only talk, cay... i had fun with this swingin' piece... huggs

Carole Duet May 14, 2019 at 8:38 PM LOL...this is adorable, so funny and unique. And, I do believe in reincarnation based on something both my kids said to me when they were little. Good luck in the contest, CayCay.

Vijay Pandit May 13, 2019 at 3:34 PM I really liked the way you gave voice to the baby face CayCay..your interpretation is quite original..an excellent write!

Andrea Dietrich May 13, 2019 at 3:22 PM haha, you went wack a doodle with this one, Caycay, showing him angry over a past death experience. Great job!

Connie Marcum Wong May 13, 2019 at 1:45 PM This is funny CayCay. Some little ones are born as an old soul and this baby seems to be one. I love your take on the contest! : ) xxoo

Winged Warrior May 13, 2019 at 9:14 AM Well crafted my 'baby faced' friend...the baby means business CayCay...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen May 13, 2019 at 5:21 AM - Yes, is really angry face ... :))) ... well done, CayCay :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)