Baby Bluebirds

Bluebird playing blind-
man's bluff, tag you are bird "it"
nestlings dull colors
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Nieves Avatar
September 23, 2009 at 9:35 AM
Colorful, playful and joyous panorama you've potray with words, girl. A hundred thanks for your comment. I.N.
Fraser Avatar
September 18, 2009 at 4:15 PM
Beautiful Haiku Doris>>James
Kendrick Avatar
September 14, 2009 at 4:28 PM
Soup mail. Mom
Kendrick Avatar
September 14, 2009 at 4:25 PM
Love your Haiku. It is very informative as well as well written. Mom
Weber Avatar
September 14, 2009 at 9:41 AM
Excellent use of the Haiku form, with a great deal to appreciate! I enjoy the personification of the bluebird the most: playful yet insightful! Warm regards, John.
Brown Avatar
September 13, 2009 at 11:17 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry today Doris. I have enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
September 12, 2009 at 12:49 PM
A pleasant sight to see. Beautiful work...Raul
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September 12, 2009 at 9:02 AM
Delightful haiku! Like the idea of birds playing tag! Lovely image. Love, Carolyn
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