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 She wears her kindness, a full length gown  as if it were a pair of baby blue jeans  soft in color, tough in its fabric. She is adorned in silk  refracts incoming ideas  produces her own. Like the shimmer  of this same silk  she is brilliant! Her embrace is boundless. Her exuberance unmatched. She is "music". Paints with the bold strokes of her guitar, the perfect pitch of her voice, natures smile. She is an original, nothing like you. She is  passionate, exactly like you. She offers all this, more. Chooses you. "I love her with every fiber..." Often I wonder. With so many beautiful words  attaching themselves so easily to women why would any man ever need to lie...
Sept/26/2014

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Date: 9/26/2014 10:55:00 PM
Utterly gorgeous! I just answered all my comments for the night and thought, gosh, I have not seen Mauricio's poetry. Wow, I am glad I came to this one. I adore it! Please don't let me ever hear you say again that you are not a poet!!
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Date: 9/26/2014 4:20:00 PM
I used to love playing the guitar once upon a time,thanks for bringing back a memory of those youthful days when I played and played.I wonder why men have to lie,so many a time?this I do,not all of them of course,Sometimes One finds an honest one who appears out of the blue L:).I love the appreciation you show for women in this post .Lovely\\\
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/26/2014 6:28:00 PM
Char. You are wonderful person and a great poet. All the best.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/26/2014 5:08:00 PM
This I do not know I meant not this I do..Sorry.Tnks for the comment re my mom.She lost her mom when She was in her early teens,then married my dad who after a few years got ill with long term depression.She became the breadwinner.She had a tough life yet lves God and life so muxg.Tnks for that comment it meant a lot.I have to thank others too.Tmks
Date: 9/26/2014 10:59:00 AM
So beautiful! I love it! Pandita
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Date: 9/26/2014 10:43:00 AM
Maurice . . . I think you've made a hit with this one with all the women -- and I noticed -- especially with Jan. Very well-done my friend. Cheers, Gary
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Date: 9/26/2014 10:42:00 AM
Sweet write any woman wud cherish! Amazingly beautiful Maurice! Ques in the last having its own answer!
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Date: 9/26/2014 9:17:00 AM
Maurice it is so so so kind of you to write me this poem ;-) (well i wish it was for me but I don't play the guitar) amazing imagery, amazing write, amazing poet ...overall I think its pretty good:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/26/2014 10:21:00 AM
As if? HAHAHAHA!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/26/2014 9:50:00 AM
You can have your paper ring back - we're through!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/26/2014 9:48:00 AM
HAHAHAHA!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/26/2014 9:40:00 AM
Oh no poetic licence allowed Maurice -'I've not got a guitar so I can strum or paint ... and its not about me -:-( I'm simply heartbroken but its a great write all the same:-) hugs jan xxx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/26/2014 9:34:00 AM
You don't need to paint with a guitar I was taking poetic license. This is about you...it is about every woman. If this doesn't get me laid then there is no hope for me. I am sending a copy to every woman within a five mile radius of me.