Baby Blue-13

innocence wears wings,
       sweet blue scent-
                    death arrived with ease





MagiCicada Poetry Contest
June 18, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 12:24 PM
ahhh, so sad but beautiful. Loved how you worked that title in with blue scent. Congrats. Yours had great imagery.
Gentry Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 9:41 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
Lawless Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 7:45 PM
Well Laura, this is a little mind twister...lean one way or.....the other and its shades of meaning enter shadows
Gauthier Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 3:40 PM
Beautiful and so touching, Laura. Congrats on your top win.
Talbot Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 10:29 AM
Thought provoking indeed! A well-deserved win, congratulations Luloo. Mick
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 8:22 AM
There is a sad lightness about this piece that engages heart and mind. Beautifully done Luloo. Congratulations on your first place finish inmy contest! Thank you for your support :) xomo!
Canerdy Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 7:54 AM
So touching, Luloo. CONGRATS! Janice
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