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Baby Bliss

That little white wand gave us such magical news and I purchased baby magazines for us to peruse So much information, far too much to take in By all means read them, then put them in the bin! Each baby is unique, use gut instinct as a mother A new life grows inside, so much you will discover We didn’t tell anyone until I’d had my first scan The midwife helped me prepare my birthing plan One day I discovered that I’d lost some blood We dashed to the hospital as quick as we could An ultrasound confirmed everything was alright I admit at the time it gave us a terrible fright Tears flowed freely as I’d been so terrified That the baby inside me had tragically died After that it went smoothly and I put on weight I was so enormous, no longer a petite size eight! The nursery was painted in a light lemon shade I borrowed a crib where the babe would be laid The labour started when my hubby was at work I said get me to the hospital - I was going berserk! My labour was long, but when the baby arrives Everything’s forgotten as you hear those first cries Cherish every second when your baby is here They change almost daily in that very first year! A poetry soup baby is ‘souper news’ many congrats Olive and James Joys and Tears of being an expectant mother Sponsored By Olive Eliosa Guillermo-Fraser THE CONTEST CLOSED THEN FOR SOME REASON IT RE-OPENED SO I FINISHED MY POEM I'D STARTED 8/7/18
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Daniel Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Nice entry, Jan, written out of experience:)
Allison Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 7:27 PM
It sure was Jo and I wouldn't change a moment of it becoming a mother was the best thing ever to happen to me:-) hugs jan xx
Warrior Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 6:54 AM
Congratulations on your baby poem, Jan...was it a cesarean lol...nicely birthed...love & stitches...^WW^
Allison Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 7:26 PM
LOL ^WW^ no they didn't have to do a c section :-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 4:34 AM
Superbly expressed Jan! I think birth is so special that we mothers never forget that time of giving birth. This is lovely! ; )
Allison Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 4:41 AM
Thanks Connie, having my son is the best thing ever, he is an amazing young man and I am so so so proud of all he has achieved!:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 3:57 AM
- You've described this so alive ... gave me both tears and smiles - A wonderful poem for this contest, Jan - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 4:06 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise I don't know if Olive and James will see of as the contest re opened and I finished the poem I;d started. :-) Sure brings back memories writing about it!:-) hugs Jan xx
Wigley Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 12:21 AM
Never mind the contest, jan, a wonderful piece and yes, how the years fly by.... Viv x
Allison Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 4:05 AM
They sure do Mr Viv and later this month son is travelling and we have no idea when he will be back:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 4:27 PM
you've described this so well, jan! it sounds like a contest winner to me...
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 5:41 PM
I think you may appreciate my martians poem!:-) hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 5:40 PM
I don't know if it will get read by the sponsors, the contest closed before i finished the poem then it appeared back on the page, why i don't know, but I thought I would enter it anyway as the space was there:-) hugs jan xx
Kiser Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 2:42 PM
That would scare me too; I'm glad it all turned out alright. An adorable poem.
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 2:53 PM
Thanks ML, I got sent home from work because I was bleeding and my hubby met me at the hospital but they confirmed everything was ok but it was a worrying day I will never forget, just had to rest and I was fine:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 2:34 PM
Well that took me back a few years Jan when we had our three daughters. Such an eventful time, you captured it well. Good luck. Tom
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 2:55 PM
Every pregnancy is different, I remember getting books and magazines and being overwhelmed with info - the best people to help are ones around you but also gut instinct that something may not be right:-) hugs jan xx
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