Baby

His fingers tremble
As he holds the scan
A shadow image
In an inky cloud  
“See there’s a backbone”

Though just a smudge
You have begun
To live your life
Full of promise

Unaware
You lie curled
Not knowing

You’ve changed
The world

Now
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Mcnaughton Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 2:06 PM
great stuff Maggie. x
Degenhardt Avatar
September 24, 2008 at 11:18 AM
First I must comment on the flow and contents - wonderful! Your message is clear and so easily understood through a terrific use of imagery and flow. Now, the 1st line second verse needs one more syllable, how about "Though just a smudge"? Otherwise a fantastic read. Michael
White Avatar
September 9, 2008 at 6:21 PM
great introspective write, new life, new beginnings, take care D-nyce
Richards Avatar
September 8, 2008 at 5:56 AM
What a wonderful way to start the morning, to read this poem about a new life ...and yes! This brand new miracle will change someone's world! Good job! ~Carrie
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace