Baby???

Baby, it's rainin
I've gone out 
and put myself 
in the rain
what do you think
think of this thunder
you scared?
not me
I put it around my neck
put it where it should be
but I would really
I would really like it
If you would come
and
and just get me
ok, I'm scared and hungry
mostly scared
come get me
Baby???
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Harrington Avatar
June 12, 2008 at 12:40 AM
what i am reading into this makes me very, very, very... nervous.
Higgins Avatar
June 9, 2008 at 7:38 PM
I love this read and how the poem flowed. I like when a poet can write wqithout thinking about periods and all the other conventions that goes with writing, just let it flow baby..and you did.
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