Babushka

Babushka The whole village busy looking at the new star *Babushka busy cleaning her house entire So busy to tidy her house failed to hear The sounds of the drums and pipes She missed even the star to see. Suddenly heard loud knocking on her door Three kings and a servant at her door Needed a place to rest until the night falls As her house was the tidiest. Serving baked bread, pies and cakes She asked very many questions to the kings King Caspar said they have come a long way King Balthazar said they follow the new star That would lead them to a new born King, The king of kings, The King of Earth and Heaven And asked to accompany them to see the star. Babushka asked so many questions to herself “How about the dress? What a work pending? No, excuse me, I have no time.” Again the star appeared in the sky The kings departed sadly. Working the whole night she got tired And slept for the whole day. Finally, she took all the toys She washed for the New Baby Ran down to the path the kings had taken Asking about from village to village, town to town Finally knew the kings had gone to Bethlehem Where she was informed by the landlord of an inn The kings were there for two days But he couldn’t provide them the room, stayed in stable She visited the stable but of no avail, There, a man informed her that kings went their places After finding the world’s Savior who she missed. Babushka is still looking for Him.
• Based on the legend of a Russian woman living in a small village* Second place win in Contest: Christmas Epic Poem by Leonara
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A  Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 9:46 PM
DR., Congrats, with your EPIC CHRISTMAS is winning poem... TAKE CARE :) ~SKAT~
Deschler Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 6:47 PM
I have heard of a legend that was very similar to this before. You retold it very nicely in your poem, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem.
Onclaud Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 3:16 PM
enjoyed the whole story and its beginnings, dr, ram.. sweet congrats!
Hamilton Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 12:48 PM
very good Ram congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
Guzzi Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 12:12 PM
Yes I have heard the legend of Babushka! Congrad's Light & Love
May Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 10:40 AM
congrats on a great win Dr Ram
Horsch Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 6:52 AM
A very good poem Dr Ram, and a nice win......Roger
Gasun Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 2:09 AM
My heartfelt congratulations my dear friend, Dr. Ram ! Biggest hugs! Thank you so much for your support. Happy, Happy New Year and Advance Happy Three Kings! love lots, Leonora
Mehta Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 4:06 AM
Thanks for my placement in your contest.
Anglesey Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 10:54 PM
I enjoyed this meaningful story very much. :)
Sirak Avatar
December 22, 2013 at 7:34 AM
Beautiful and loaded with meaning. Many people are still looking for him.
Heckman Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 1:38 PM
A beautiful poem, very vivid...a classic
Dunn Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 2:03 PM
A very interesting write here beautiful in it's own moral meaning, well done. cheri
Andresen Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 4:04 AM
- A beautiful poem, Dr. Ram - - Thanks for all the beautiful poems you have shared with me - and thank you for all your kind comments on my poems. - Wish you and everyone you love a pleasant Christmas! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Thirtyseven Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 10:53 PM
You're teaching us things here in such an elegant way. Thank you not only for your graceful words, but the lesson.
Oyewole Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 10:03 AM
A well crafted piece. Good work!
Kendrick Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 9:53 AM
Ahh!! Sad that Babushka missed Jesus' entrance into the world who would not accept Him and still today do not accept Him..Thanks for the visit to my page..Humor and laughter are powerful medicines..Sara
Cavanaugh Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 6:08 AM
Poor Babushka. Enjoyed your poem. The title of this poem reminds me of a toy I enjoyed as a child. One Babushka inside another, inside another, etc, etc,
A   Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 11:05 PM
Amazing poem Dr Ram... xoxo...Linda
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