Baboon

There was a baboon in my bed, I thought it appeared to be dead, So I turned out the light, But it chattered all night And swung off the curtains instead. For PD’s Silly poem contest

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Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/3/2013 5:29:00 AM

Love this poem. Great animal poem. Very witty

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/11/2013 11:47:00 AM

Love it ;} and you won , nice job .

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/1/2013 4:19:00 PM

LOL! Congratulations on your winning poem, Jack!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2013 3:48:00 PM

congrats, this sure deserved to be on the list.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/30/2013 9:36:00 PM

Jack, wow! I can't believe I forgot to thank you for the nice and silly poem you entered in my contest. A late late late CONGRATULATIONS. Thank you for the smirks and smiles your poem gave me while reading it. Hope you can forgive me, it is not like me to stoop low and diss all who support me or my contest. Even if I get no response, everyone still matters, and I try my best... Love love LINDA...

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/29/2013 9:21:00 AM

A funny on Jack. Thanks for your comment. Have been sick with the flu . Had two different ones back to back. Did not think I had lungs left as I coughed so much. Have a great week and nice to hear from you. love phyl

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/29/2013 9:22:00 AM

should be a funny one--my computer keys are sticking lol

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/24/2013 8:26:00 AM

Funny and cute! Now Congrats on your win. AO

Len Gasun

Date: 5/23/2013 7:23:00 PM

Big heartfelt congrats on your fabulous win my dear friend! This is really great and funny! Thanks for sharing and the smiles! love/hugs, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/20/2013 4:43:00 AM

- Jack, very nice to read ..... lol. - Good luck in the contest! - Have a beautifully day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/20/2013 4:40:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work..Very humorous but could be scary..Thanks for stopping by..Reads like a winner for PD's contest..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/19/2013 11:35:00 PM

hahaha, this one is sure to make the list!!! thanks for all your comments today, Jack. Hope to see more great poems from you, my friend.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/19/2013 1:57:00 PM

You played it well. Well done and Good luck in the contest. AO

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 5/19/2013 12:19:00 PM

Jack a great poem for the Silly contest. It put a laugh in my breath. Warm Smiles, Connie

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/19/2013 12:08:00 PM

HA HA HA, oh Jack, you surely have humored me with this elaborately funny write! I truly loved this hilarious and instantly wonderful poem my friend! I really loved reading this amazingly funny piece, Great Work!!

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/19/2013 11:24:00 AM

Funny/silly... good luck in the contest, Jack! ... Terry