Babe Ruth the Swimmer

I dreamt of Babe Ruth
in Howard Johnsons' 
lighted pool doing

the backstroke so brilliantly.
No bats lying around
anywhere. warm water

reflected dorsal pecs, 
beautiful biceps, round
spiral muscles fanning

along so softly.
Finally finding the nerve
to say: Babe! your a

ballplayer; Sultan of swat.
Smiling at me timidly:
I'm a ballplayer and a

a swimmer. He replied
calmly gliding away.
A swan in the moonlight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 3:14 PM
Allen, I'm simply fascinated by this one...And it's true: Babe was an unbelievable athlete (till he had one hotdog too many)...So was Wilt the Stilt Chamberlin. (You know that he high-jumped 6' 10" and was a decathlon man back in the day?!). Maybe you'll do one on him. But not a sleep study, please...Oh, those thousands of women, allegedly. (I think it's 'a bit' of an exaggeration, personally. Yet he was so, so lonely...) ~ gw
Krutsinger Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 11:30 PM
A fantastic reminder that we are three, four, and five-dimensional. Not one thing can fully define any of us, right Allen?
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 11:43 PM
Yes indeed dear Caren
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 10:56 PM
Didn't know him for swimming, albeit, baseball was not a cuppa with me, tho' swimming is, huh, go figure, thanks allen, Aloha wk
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 11:22 PM
Thanks William
Romios Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 7:56 PM
Allen, this is a beautiful poem, do you realize it? And truly unique. Panagiota
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 10:52 PM
Thank you so much Panagiota
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