Babbling Brook

Bubbling, babbling brook
Smooth stones washed by your motion
Sunlight shadows dance
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Merryman Avatar
August 5, 2021 at 5:53 PM
A lovely haiku, Linda! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Craddick Avatar
August 5, 2021 at 9:19 PM
Thank you!
Allison Avatar
August 5, 2021 at 1:08 PM
such super imagery and I love the use of alliteration Linda, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Craddick Avatar
August 5, 2021 at 9:19 PM
Thank you!
Agustin Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 10:20 PM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 11:36 AM
Pretty, Linda! Congratulations!
Craddick Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 1:37 PM
Thank you!
Alex Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 6:51 AM
It's a beautiful one on the brook. Congratulations on your win!
Craddick Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 1:38 PM
Thank you.
Mcintosh Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 6:34 AM
I love the shadows dancing... Lovely writing. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina
Craddick Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 1:38 PM
Thank you, Gina.
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