Babble

This Psycho matic Babble Drama fueling Trauma Is Loosening mind Screwy By Mending amist Rending Right Into The Tightness Of An Ending

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James Horn

Date: 11/3/2016 7:42:00 PM

HB, So is insomnia either somatic or psychotic? Jim Horn

Holly Bohto
Date: 11/4/2016 3:40:00 PM

somatic turns into psychotic. psycho babble loosening mind screwy

Christy Stover

Date: 11/3/2016 7:17:00 PM

I love how this says so much and something so profound in so few words. You definitely have talent.

Holly Bohto
Date: 11/4/2016 3:42:00 PM

talent or madness who knows the difference

Chris Green

Date: 11/2/2016 8:43:00 AM

Sounds like how my day has started off. Quite abstract but definitely speaks to me. I really enjoy your writing style, you are very unique in your expressiveness and design, the sign of a true artist.

Holly Bohto
Date: 11/2/2016 9:14:00 AM

Thanks Chris. It's like Breathing to me Automatic. Don't know how I got this Way. A freak on a leash some days. Thanks for getting abstract thinking...