b c d e f g h i

babyish blubbering beyond the brink
crazy crying in the kitchen sink
dubious dabbling in the dugout
eager eating silenced with a pout

furious flitting among the flowers
groveling garden grubworms giving glowers
heretics hitting heroic heights for hours
igniting iguana’s ideas in spring showers
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Lawless Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 1:59 PM
my eyes and tongue were tied before the second stanza...neatly done in this alliterative dance
Krutsinger Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 10:36 PM
thank you much John
Griffiths Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 3:48 AM
I really like all the alliteration and "eager eating silenced with a pout". The whole poem is very cool and clever. You have lots of poems on here, and I'm looking forward to reading more of them! Thanks for going to the effort of posting them. Terry
Krutsinger Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 10:36 PM
thank you so much Terry
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