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Written: September 30, 2023 Sponsored by: Silent One Pick a Colour Contest "There is my body, in it an ocean formed of his glory, all the creation, all the universes, all the galaxies, are lost in it. Rumi"
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In the scenic scope of a sparklingly stained sky. Brushstrokes by a dulcet master, sky-high An exhibit of azure splendor, a masterpiece. Exquisite works of nature, why must you cease?   A cyanic cerulean, cavorting and courageous Paints a tale that is both untold and tenacious. Azure colors dance with genuine happiness. All day long, hearts are captured by sappiness. Wispy wetness, whitening whisper wreath. With complete pride, wrap the sheath Clouds of cotton candy wander nearby. Adding elegance and grace to a sunny sky   A golden orb, the sun, sends a brilliant light. Exudes a svelte and diaphanous gaze bright. A radiance of soft light through the universe. Fluttering formulaic fascination is fluminous. Flowers fields in fabulous fonts of Forebay Akin to a painter's palette, they thrive and sway. Delicate petals, akin to brushstrokes fine, Creating a tapestry is so divine. The ocean waves have a turquoise hue. Crash upon the shore, in shades of dew. Symphony of mellifluous vibe, a rhythmic song, As the creator elixir flows swiftly along,   Seagulls whiz by with wings wassail wide. Their graceful flight was a sight to abide.  They elapse through the canvas with elegant ease. Adding zest and zeal to an ephemeral breeze As the day gyres to dusk, the sky transforms. Brushstrokes of indigo chart various forms. Mahogany and navy, fete the felicity of the scene. Choreographing a fugacious, halcyon, and serene Furtive stars twinkle, akin to gems so bright, As the divine fulfills the tableau for the night, Brushstrokes of cobalt in the glamor sky, A marvelous feat that yields hearts to sigh.   The splendor of nature's marvels can't be denied. A canvas filled with hues, so bright and defied The creator is inconspicuous, yet his aura is felt. It's clearly blatant in the cyan smudges knelt.

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Date: 10/11/2023 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a wonderful write/story/pretty picture. Your pen was working over time. "Love It" Have a blessed day.....................
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Date: 10/10/2023 6:52:00 AM
Back to say congrats on a win.
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Date: 10/9/2023 1:10:00 PM
As always your poem flows really well and is full of lovely imagery.. Thank you for writing and congratulations on your placement..
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Date: 10/2/2023 7:37:00 AM
Too tough for me to follow, yet I am charmed. I am great admirer of your poem. Whelmed with your gorgeous narration Of splendour of Nature’s marvels in outstanding alliteration. Blessings.
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Date: 10/1/2023 5:19:00 AM
Beautiful images throughout, my friend. And equally beautiful concluding lines: The splendor of nature's marvels can't be denied. A canvas filled with hues, so bright and defied.
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Date: 10/1/2023 4:00:00 AM
This is absolutely stunning! How gorgeous is the way you’ve used alliterations and rhymes and made this poem flow in such an eloquent manner, i love how descriptive your imagery is and how you’ve written about ocean etc. im sure silent one will appreciate this take, your wordplay and use of poetic techniques as well as that rumi quote will definitely make this poem a winning write that he would too find as sheer brilliance just like the rest of your readers! I am in awe! Loved this! Goodluck
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Date: 10/1/2023 3:44:00 AM
You are a master of poetic words Lasaad….you take the reader there! Debx
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Date: 10/1/2023 2:10:00 AM
Great poem with such beautiful imagery. Your poetry always excels. One of the best on the soup.
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Date: 9/30/2023 8:49:00 PM
Your vivid imagery, alliteration and prodigious vocabulary are both impressive and inspiring! Love how you weave this together..a real treat to read! Best of luck in the contest! :)
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Date: 9/30/2023 2:56:00 PM
Very stimulating to hear and imagine. You outdo only yourself. Just when I think you've written a top poem you surpass skills you have in another. Love listening to it!
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Date: 9/30/2023 1:36:00 PM
a brilliantly crafted poem. The rhyme scheme is done so well that it doesn't seem contrived. You painted a beautiful landscape picture with your words. Made me appreciate the beauty of nature that I sometimes take for granted. The portrait you painted was truly elegant. Am faving this one...enjoy your weekend and best wishes with the contest. Sara
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