Azure

A ncient sky untouched
Z ealous without clouds, sans rain
U biquitous fruitful trees;
R esounding innocent hue
E yes, bright and succulent blue
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Goldsmith Avatar
July 31, 2024 at 9:23 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your colorful "AZURE" Acrostic write. Great Color.... Have a blessed day writing away...........
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2024 at 10:18 AM
Thank you, Paula xx
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 3:06 PM
Kim. I loved lines 1, 2 and 5. Those for me captured very beautifully the color of azure. Thanks for submitting and congrats in my contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 7:57 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 7:44 PM
Sounds like 'Just East of Eden!' Either that or 'pair o' dice' itself!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 8:15 PM
How wonderful it would be to see. We probably can’t take such awesome glory in our current state.Thanks, Gershon!
Rolland Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 5:48 PM
delicious as a blie sky in summer, works like a metaphor too, enjoyed this beautiful tanka , thanks KIm
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 6:48 PM
Thank you kindly, my friend!
Evans Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 1:33 PM
Nicely done, Kim. What a lovely poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 5:47 PM
Thank you, Marilene!
Hind Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 12:34 PM
Beautiful work, loved this one too <3
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 5:47 PM
Thank you, Paige!
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