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Azure

A ncient sky untouched Z ealous without clouds, sans rain U biquitous fruitful trees; R esounding innocent hue E yes, bright and succulent blue

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Date: 7/31/2024 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your colorful "AZURE" Acrostic write. Great Color.... Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/31/2024 10:18:00 AM
Thank you, Paula xx
Date: 7/29/2024 3:06:00 PM
Kim. I loved lines 1, 2 and 5. Those for me captured very beautifully the color of azure. Thanks for submitting and congrats in my contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2024 7:57:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Date: 7/11/2024 7:44:00 PM
Sounds like 'Just East of Eden!' Either that or 'pair o' dice' itself!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2024 8:15:00 PM
How wonderful it would be to see. We probably can’t take such awesome glory in our current state.Thanks, Gershon!
Date: 7/11/2024 5:48:00 PM
delicious as a blie sky in summer, works like a metaphor too, enjoyed this beautiful tanka , thanks KIm
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2024 6:48:00 PM
Thank you kindly, my friend!
Date: 7/11/2024 1:33:00 PM
Nicely done, Kim. What a lovely poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2024 5:47:00 PM
Thank you, Marilene!
Date: 7/11/2024 12:34:00 PM
Beautiful work, loved this one too <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2024 5:47:00 PM
Thank you, Paige!

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