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Azrael Does Devour

While fitful, impetuous, tears force to submissive dirge an enshrouded grey shadow within mine afflicted heart. In ghastly, pallid emptiness; beguiling Azrael does cajoles. "Ah, Tis only, immolation that can enchant and subdue Azrael." 2/19/2020

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Date: 3/4/2020 3:01:00 PM
Congrats, Eve, on your powerful write!
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Date: 3/4/2020 6:03:00 AM
You did an amazing job imitating Poe's work, Eve. I loved every line. Great write, dear friend. Congratulations on your winning poem! Hugs Charlie
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Date: 3/2/2020 11:59:00 PM
Enshrouded, pallid, immolation - such great Poe words. Well done, Eve, and congrats on your #1 ~ John
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Date: 3/2/2020 8:51:00 PM
Your words smell the nostalgic old..Great win Eve..
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Date: 2/23/2020 8:17:00 PM
wow… great use of language in this write Eve… it fits the era and has the poe like theme... great write... best wishes in the contest... hugs
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Date: 2/21/2020 4:15:00 PM
Brilliant use of antique words, such as 'dirge' and 'enshrouded' - it sets the mood for haunted rooms - should do well in the contest -
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Date: 2/21/2020 1:41:00 PM
- Impressive, Eve - Excellent ... I'm speechless - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/21/2020 10:04:00 AM
Very Poe-tic indeed ...
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Date: 2/20/2020 8:41:00 AM
Eve, I think you have captured a bit of Poe with this one. I love the macabre feel of it. "immolation" great word for a Poe-ish like poem. Good luck!
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