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Azaleas-- Haiku

white azaleas

           freshly  cut from her  backyard--

      Mother's Day bouquet



3/15/2019
Writing Challenge 2, March 2019 - Haiku- 
Sponsor: Dear Heart

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2019

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April 25, 2019 at 4:50 PM

Read aloud the guttural sounds crisp as the grief. I love haiku for their capture of a moment.

Mahtab Bangalee

March 31, 2019 at 2:02 AM

greatly penned this haiku

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

March 27, 2019 at 6:38 PM

this is a favorite, by the way

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

March 27, 2019 at 6:31 PM

Wow! So powerful and surprise ending.

Constance La France

March 18, 2019 at 10:49 AM

Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent haiku~

March 18, 2019 at 8:15 AM

Nette, your haiku is brilliant. The last line is totally unexpected. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Best Wishes~ Warren

March 18, 2019 at 4:19 AM

Back with well deserved congratulations nette. Tom.

Connie Marcum Wong

March 17, 2019 at 11:03 PM

A moving haiku Nette. Congratulations on your wonderful first place win! : )

March 17, 2019 at 6:33 PM

Nette, great Haiku. Congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`*

Andrea Dietrich

March 17, 2019 at 6:21 PM

Wonderful win. Congrats, Nette

Abdul Malik Mandani

March 17, 2019 at 3:33 PM

Wow!

March 17, 2019 at 3:30 PM

beautiful and sad imagery, congratulations on your top win!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 17, 2019 at 2:51 PM

- Beautiful and touching, Nette :) - Congratulations on your top win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

March 16, 2019 at 1:43 PM

She'd like that, best wishes...

Carolyn Devonshire

March 16, 2019 at 10:51 AM

A beautiful yet sad haiku, Nette. Winning wishes for you in Dear Heart's challenge. Hugs, Carolyn

March 16, 2019 at 4:36 AM

A very touching haiku Nette. Tom. .

Caren Krutsinger

March 16, 2019 at 2:13 AM

Ah, so pretty. Great job!

March 15, 2019 at 11:12 PM

Perfectly intriguing haiku, Nette! So good! Good luck in the contest! :)

March 15, 2019 at 10:12 PM

Beautiful yet sad Nette..

Frederic Parker

March 15, 2019 at 9:04 PM

didn't see the last line coming... a strong poem visually and emotionally

Mystic Rose Rose

March 15, 2019 at 8:17 PM

Mothers always own the best flowers, our hearts being one of them, lovely poem Nette. Hope all is well, hugs xo

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