Axis Spin

The world spins on the same loop it always has
Moving by regrets and mistakes of the past
And though it turns the same way as before
May the next sunrise shine on tomorrow
And move by all the pain and sorrow
Spinning madly on to better and brighter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Neels Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 9:06 PM
We all live in hope Evan.. Great write, hope yours will be better too :) Wilma
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September 12, 2010 at 7:27 PM
Yes it does, Evan! Enjoyed your ending line made your point across. Have a nice one...LeeAnn
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