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The sky at midnight same as any other time... the earth moves us all. © Harry J Horsman 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/15/2012 3:02:00 PM
Looking up makes me feel small but not in a bad way. It makes me appreciate being part of something so magnificent.
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Date: 11/15/2012 1:16:00 PM
I get the same feeling lying on the ground looking up at the stars...my brother and I used to spend entire summer nights watching stars and feeling the universe tingle....nice share, Harry
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Date: 10/13/2012 8:18:00 PM
Enjoyable hsiku! We are all stuck - for the time being - on this blue orb. Let's make the best of it with wine, woman, song - and poetry. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/25/2012 8:06:00 PM
Hello Harry... the earth is the best mental situation around me. love the way you made me rotate along with your haiku.. xox~pd
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Date: 9/25/2012 6:56:00 AM
enjoyed reading your works this day with my coffee. Harry you remind me of Galileo....
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Date: 9/24/2012 9:46:00 PM
Still loving this one. Now I will go searching for a few of your oldies!!
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Date: 9/24/2012 8:39:00 PM
We are the ones doing the moving, not the sky. Good haiku.
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Date: 9/24/2012 11:52:00 AM
That's candid, but true. Thank you for the review. Linda
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Date: 9/24/2012 10:52:00 AM
so much meaning in such few words - nicely done :)
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Date: 9/24/2012 1:46:00 AM
Hi there I have left you a soup mail x
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Date: 9/23/2012 3:23:00 PM
tender is the way you portray the circling of the sun, harry.. eloquent' ku!..:) huggs!
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Date: 9/23/2012 7:04:00 AM
A very poignant and beautifully crafted haiku. Thank you for sharing my friend and also thank you for dropping by my page. Hugs
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Date: 9/23/2012 1:58:00 AM
Deep thought. Well said. Tfs
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Date: 9/22/2012 6:18:00 PM
some in circles,some up and down,some left or right,earth moves us all,witty Harry
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Date: 9/22/2012 1:58:00 PM
very clever write here, Harry - love it
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Date: 9/21/2012 9:41:00 PM
Every thing the same vs. we are moving. I really like that contrast!
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Date: 9/21/2012 4:06:00 PM
ahhhhh a deep thinker ;) Light & Love
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Date: 9/21/2012 12:24:00 PM
Great work that we all can relate to and understand..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 9/21/2012 11:26:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your writing with us Harry. I enjoyed reading it today. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/21/2012 10:11:00 AM
Studying it line by studying, still I noticed my brain's nut runinng farther, setting words life draft game or chess. Father still Father, youngman still youngman... Good one Harry.
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Date: 9/21/2012 9:28:00 AM
Reads as a haiku should....suggesting so much more than the mere words say...a good haiku.
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Date: 9/21/2012 8:23:00 AM
It certainly does, it moves my earth anyway xx
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Date: 9/21/2012 7:52:00 AM
Yeah...so true harry.Very nice haiku!
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Date: 9/21/2012 7:38:00 AM
This is quite the factual write, a plain and truthful poem my friend! I really enjoyed this awesome and fully marvelous write Harry! What a superior poem in many ways, no denying the reality of this write! Harmonious piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/21/2012 7:28:00 AM
Yes, that's true Harry. Well written. - Have a lovely weekend. / / oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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