Awesome Noonday Romance-Triolet

Entranced was I  by her blue eyes. 
awe-striking glow she cast at noon
In mead of green we drew snug ties
entranced was I by her blue eyes
sun-blest embrace aroused vast sighs
wild kissing rapt in spruce balm croon
entranced was I by her blue eyes
awe-striking glow she cast at noon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kauffman Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 12:35 PM
Howard, congratulations on your winning placement. This is so lovely! Your words sing of a cherished love. Sending you blessings.
Kendrick Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 4:33 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Awesome. Sara K.
Poet Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 4:21 AM
Congratulations on your contest win with your excellent poem, Howard.
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 1:22 AM
Congrats in my contest, Howard . Nice and romantic.
Kerr Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 10:16 AM
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for placing my entry, Andrea. I apologise for not replying earlier due to a System Error on poetry soup. It was impossible for me to log in. Warm wishes Howard
Kendrick Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 4:07 AM
Wow! Way to go for the contest. It reads like a good contender to me. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K.
Kerr Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 4:34 AM
Your endorsement of this triolet is truly valued by me. So grateful for your visits and reflections, Sara. Fingers crossed on this one. Howard
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