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Awesome Feat

Cobalt clouds lie heavy laden Clear sun's light peeks through gray Crows cawing says enjoy the time Even on this rain drenched day The barn swallows fly out to hunt Their circles and swoops low I hope their breakfast is delish And in the sky God hangs a bow The air is pleasant, damp and cool There's an eerie stillness Will there be thunderstorms today A day filled with realness It's so comfy out on the porch A little break from the heat This time needed for some real praise Thank God, for awesome feat
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July 20, 2024 at 10:39 AM
The imagery here is wonderful my friend.. Right from the first stanza... lovely use of words..
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 1:08 PM
Glad you liked it, SO. I appreciate the visit and taking time to comment. Sara K
Vaso Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 11:39 PM
I think I want t come and sit on your porch, beautiful poetry.
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 3:47 AM
Arthur, spring and fall is good for out on porch. Summer and winter a bit uncomfortable unless there are breaks in the weather patterns at that time. Thanks for dropping by . Sara K
George Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 9:33 PM
It seems you spend a lot of time in your porch enjoying nature and the weather. I also understand that it is your time for thanksgiving and prayer. Beautiful poem dear Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 3:45 AM
Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Hind Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 8:10 PM
Lovely- it's been raining here, too. Beautiful feeling...
Roper Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 6:58 PM
Sara, love the imagery you've described in your verse. Comfy out on the porch sounds good.
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 3:44 AM
Eve, just a few minutes here and there. I don't get out much anymore. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 3:12 PM
Great imagery and action. Let it rain :)
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 3:44 AM
We've needed it here for some time and thank, God, He has sent it. Hot and humid though. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
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