Awesome Feat

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Image result for pictures of out on the porch on a cobalt cloudy morn

Cobalt clouds lie heavy laden Clear sun's light peeks through gray Crows cawing says enjoy the time Even on this rain drenched day The barn swallows fly out to hunt Their circles and swoops low I hope their breakfast is delish And in the sky God hangs a bow The air is pleasant, damp and cool There's an eerie stillness Will there be thunderstorms today A day filled with realness It's so comfy out on the porch A little break from the heat This time needed for some real praise Thank God, for awesome feat

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Silent One

Date: 7/20/2024 10:39:00 AM

The imagery here is wonderful my friend.. Right from the first stanza... lovely use of words..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/20/2024 1:08:00 PM

Glad you liked it, SO. I appreciate the visit and taking time to comment. Sara K

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/19/2024 11:39:00 PM

I think I want t come and sit on your porch, beautiful poetry.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/20/2024 3:47:00 AM

Arthur, spring and fall is good for out on porch. Summer and winter a bit uncomfortable unless there are breaks in the weather patterns at that time. Thanks for dropping by . Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 7/19/2024 9:33:00 PM

It seems you spend a lot of time in your porch enjoying nature and the weather. I also understand that it is your time for thanksgiving and prayer. Beautiful poem dear Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/20/2024 3:45:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the visit. Sara K