Jerry T Curtis Poet Rhyme

Awesome Blossom

The night's impatience sky
Twists itself around our earth
There, falling stars will fly
While the moon proves what it's worth

I'm standing in this field, 
Just waiting for the hour
When the sun will rise once more
To shine its light, upon this flower

Some might ask me why
I come each day to view this blossom
But if they use My eyes
They would see she's simply awesome


All I do for her,
Is to visit, in my leisure
But what she does for me
Is fill my eyes and heart with pleasure 

And if you care to share
The blessings that I yield 
You need to get up early
To see the Sun's light
Fill this field

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Sharon Gulley February 15, 2015 at 7:15 PM Such a sweet and tender feeling you get when you read this poem. I love the ever so easy flow of this write. Awesome Jerry....Sharon G. It's a 7 from me.

Gary Bateman December 30, 2014 at 2:49 PM Jerry . . . Enjoyed your write here very much!! The gradual progression of your imagery is perfect here as you build out your verses. The last two verses are really great: "To see Sun's light / Fill this field." A "Seven" from me. Very Well-Done. Best Always, Gary Jerry T Curtis December 31, 2014 at 4:52 AM You are too kind Gary and very accurate, lol thanks Gary

Jan Allison December 30, 2014 at 9:57 AM lovely touching write Jerry:-) Hugs Jan xx Jerry T Curtis December 31, 2014 at 4:50 AM Thank you Jan

Dr.Ram Mehta December 30, 2014 at 7:03 AM I can relate and do share the yields of the early morning' health and wealth for the last seven decades, Jerry. Happy new year Jerry T Curtis December 31, 2014 at 4:53 AM Thank You Doctor---and a Happy New Year to you !