Awed

God awed me last night
My spirit took flight at the sight
A shooting star prepared for me
Flew out across the sea

The sea of the sky, it did fly
Seemed so close; so close to my eye
I felt that I could reach out
And touch; its white light in route

Did it come on and land on earth?
Or was it in the sky giving wide berth
Touching on sand in a neighboring land
I know that it gave me a feeling grand

It was prepared some eons ago to bless my soul
How many others I'll never know
God is so good to let me this memory hold
Somehow his blessings on me daily bestowes


(Rhyme sort of. Read Psalms 89:5-8 just type it in on the internet search 
engine:)

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Date: 11/20/2009 1:26:00 AM
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Date: 11/19/2009 11:17:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid writing with us Sara. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/19/2009 4:58:00 AM
It never gets old: that feeling of being awed by God and the things He does for us. Beautiful write, Sara and thanx so much for your many comments. God Bless and keep writing, Lightwalker
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