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Awe To Optimism To Submission

When I woke up this morning,
I felt hopeful, eager, positive and calm.
I was going to teach myself to juggle, 
Tossing balls from palm to palm.

I’d admired street performers perform their tricks,
On the corners of every street.
Buskers, young and old, made every little manoeuvre
Look simple, easy and neat.

They did the shuffle and box, 
The barrage and chops 
Cascading in perfect unity.
And I’d stood there amazed, 
Enthralled and half crazed, 
Knowing I’d fit right into this community.

So, what was once awe became optimism to learn, 
To grow, to build and obtain.
And I threw the balls up, watching each of them fall,
Too fast for my little brain.

My optimism fled, waving goodbye, 
Leaving me accepting a feeling of submission.
My brain’s not that fast, no juggling today,
I'm now in awe of a singing musician.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Whatley Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 6:41 AM
Lovely write, Lewis. We are indeed all bags of dreams - striving for greatness. Dream on, fellow poet!
Ashe Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 3:41 PM
I too am amazed at jugglers but to sing....that is a heart's Joy! Belt out and let it be heard!
Raynes Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 6:45 PM
loud and proud, bonus if its in tune :)
Lane Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 10:46 PM
A singing musician would be a much better option for me, too, Lewis. A good whimsical write.. enjoyed reading you.
Raynes Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 11:22 PM
lol, yep, juggling seemed nice but playing music is much nicer on everything. thanks for your nice words Lin my friend, cheers :)
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