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Away We Go

Lovebird runners we are, lost in our love Escaping from the haters Eloping to new world Written by Njeri Contest: in praise of kimo Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Visual #3 Written 2/15/15

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Date: 7/29/2015 8:24:00 AM
Following our own path is the only true way as long as we accept the consequences of our own actions or omissions. Other people have their own lives to live and their own consequences to face. All freedom to you. Hugz Ian
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 8/4/2015 3:22:00 AM
Very true. We should be proud of the choices we make. And we should also learn from them. Thank u a zillion times for the visits Ian
Date: 2/20/2015 1:38:00 PM
i hear you njeri, brilliant write here a word for the wise i must say, richard
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/21/2015 9:28:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words Richard.
Date: 2/16/2015 5:29:00 PM
Njeri, this captures the drama and trauma of forbidden love. Good luck in the contest.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/18/2015 3:18:00 PM
Thank John
Date: 2/16/2015 11:52:00 AM
- Lovely kimo, Njeri - I wish you best of luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/18/2015 3:18:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise
Date: 2/16/2015 11:13:00 AM
Good luck in Nette's contest my friend... it should do well! Huggs, Jack xxx
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/18/2015 3:19:00 PM
Thanks Jack
Date: 2/16/2015 10:47:00 AM
Wonderful poetic imagery for that visual, Njeri! I really like how you interpreted this. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/18/2015 3:20:00 PM
Thank you Sandra. Blessings
Date: 2/16/2015 8:56:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this one.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/18/2015 3:21:00 PM
Thank you Richard.
Date: 2/16/2015 3:28:00 AM
Its a lucky thing in life to find such love that one is able to run away from all else :) thank you for the nice comment for my poem :)
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/18/2015 3:22:00 PM
You are welcome Angie. Thanks for visiting me too.
Date: 2/16/2015 2:14:00 AM
Keep escaping, dear Njeri, so you keep writing such beautiful verses where the heart can find refuge!
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/18/2015 3:23:00 PM
I will keep escaping:) thanks Demetrios.
Date: 2/15/2015 10:06:00 PM
Lovely! It's wonderful to escape from haters... :) Thanks for your visit to my work. Good luck in the contest.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/18/2015 3:25:00 PM
Thanks Eileen.

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