Away We Go

Lovebird runners we are, lost in our love
                                                   Escaping from the haters
                                                   Eloping to new world





Written by Njeri
Contest: in praise of kimo
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Visual #3
Written 2/15/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Jones Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 8:24 AM
Following our own path is the only true way as long as we accept the consequences of our own actions or omissions. Other people have their own lives to live and their own consequences to face. All freedom to you. Hugz Ian
Hunjeri Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 3:22 AM
Very true. We should be proud of the choices we make. And we should also learn from them. Thank u a zillion times for the visits Ian
Nnoli Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 1:38 PM
i hear you njeri, brilliant write here a word for the wise i must say, richard
Hunjeri Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 9:28 PM
Thank you for your kind words Richard.
Lawless Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 5:29 PM
Njeri, this captures the drama and trauma of forbidden love. Good luck in the contest.
Hunjeri Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 3:18 PM
Thank John
Andresen Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 11:52 AM
- Lovely kimo, Njeri - I wish you best of luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hunjeri Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 3:18 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise
Ellison Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 11:13 AM
Good luck in Nette's contest my friend... it should do well! Huggs, Jack xxx
Hunjeri Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Thanks Jack
Haight Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 10:47 AM
Wonderful poetic imagery for that visual, Njeri! I really like how you interpreted this. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
Hunjeri Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 3:20 PM
Thank you Sandra. Blessings
Lamoureux Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 8:56 AM
I really enjoyed reading this one.
Hunjeri Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 3:21 PM
Thank you Richard.
Thomas Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 3:28 AM
Its a lucky thing in life to find such love that one is able to run away from all else :) thank you for the nice comment for my poem :)
Hunjeri Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 3:22 PM
You are welcome Angie. Thanks for visiting me too.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 2:14 AM
Keep escaping, dear Njeri, so you keep writing such beautiful verses where the heart can find refuge!
Hunjeri Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 3:23 PM
I will keep escaping:) thanks Demetrios.
Manassian Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 10:06 PM
Lovely! It's wonderful to escape from haters... :) Thanks for your visit to my work. Good luck in the contest.
Hunjeri Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 3:25 PM
Thanks Eileen.
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