Away Thou Goest

Pass me by, oh you who speak
with silver tongue, no words to keep
who doth appear to be so sweet
with honey voice and whispers deep.

Who tempts me as I try to fly
to spread my wings toward the skies
with promises and fantasies
that turn to ice and quickly freeze.

Turn now away, round corner go
and ease my pain, for I am old
deceive me not, this day must end
open the door to peace again.    






Written on 7/29/2007
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Scars Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 11:21 AM
Love this lovely Laura!! You are on fire lately!! Congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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September 16, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Thanks, Laura Loo! Actually, this was an old poem of mine from long ago...glad he liked it. :)
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September 16, 2016 at 8:18 AM
A 7 for this gentle warning to deceivers! This is SO well-written and delightful--a favorite. Congrats on your win, Laura. Janice
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September 16, 2016 at 9:20 AM
Thank you so much, Janice :)
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September 16, 2016 at 7:34 AM
Very powerful, chastising words presented with such eloquence, Laura. Congratulations on your fine placement on this short list of winners. Hugs, Sandra
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September 16, 2016 at 9:20 AM
Thank you, Sandra. I feel honored to be among you and others.
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November 28, 2014 at 1:26 PM
Excellent poem, Laura. I really enjoyed this! :) john.
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November 28, 2014 at 2:18 PM
Thank you, John! I like to use the "Old English" tongue every so often,
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