Away On a Cruise Ship

Written: July 18, 2023
Away In A Manger Contest Re Run Poetry Contest- Sponsored by: JAN ALLISON
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Cruising starts the journey
Heaven-float, dream ship
Worthy of a gurney
Surge through blue waves trip

Sunlight kisses the deck
stoked  sightseer  meet
In such a tense wreck
Start a long sail treat

The ship leaves the land back
Each person sees chances
Captain wise and skilled track
Moves the ship well dances

Devoted crews on board
Stake one's most comfort
Kitchen Chefs' are the lord
Night's joy of all sorts

Poolside to ballroom dance.
Nothing's aye boring.
Fun, thrills, limitless chance.
Days melt exploring.

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Jan Allison

July 31, 2023 at 8:53 AM

Hi Sotto, I'm sorry I had to give you an HM for your poem but I needed the poem to start with 'away and they syllable count and rhyme were a little out especially in stanza 3. Thank you for taking time to enter my contest. I do appreciate it:-) hugs Jan xx

Valsa George

July 19, 2023 at 9:07 PM

Beautiful experience on a cruise ship... dance and merriment, very friendly crew and able capatain who knows how ro steer the ship in the right direction. What more is needed? So much fun with days melting away ! All the Best dear friend.

Speaks Volumes

July 18, 2023 at 11:49 PM

It sounds marvelous!. Obviously you are enjoying every minute of it. You have written a wonderful poem for us to read, which will form an epilogue of your travels. The only thing you left out dear friend in this wonderful rhyming chronicle is " wish you all were here" :)