Submitted to the contest: Away in a manger contest - rerun, sponsored by Jan Allison.
Away in the park garden No pale flowers, only bright Where senses sharpen And worries feel light The birds sweetly sing In magnolia trees A chorus with wings Nature sounds appease Chipmunks all scatter Thieves of many seeds With playful fun chatter Now hiding in weeds Bees buzz all around Pollenating flowers Fragrant smells surround Grounds lush with showers
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