Away In a Red Bull

AWAY IN A RED BULL
Away in a Red Bull No speed limit here I drive at two hundred I’m born with no fear I catch the Mercedes And pass it with ease From then on my rear end Is all that he sees I enter the pit lane The pit crew awake Four tyres in three seconds No error they make No one can stay near me And each night I pray That always and ever That’s how it will stay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Merryman Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 7:42 PM
"I feel the need for speed!" Fun write, Bryn! Congrats on your top win! Blessings, Kim M
Flood Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 11:45 AM
Well done, Bryn. They do say ‘Red Bull gives you wings’. Congrats on your win. Terry
Edmonds  Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 11:34 AM
Wonderful Bryn, I really enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your win in Jan’s contest… Belle
Allison Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 7:56 AM
This was SO clever Bryn, love the humour especially in verse 2:-) Many congrats on your top placement and thanks for taking time to enter the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Alex Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 7:19 AM
Great driver, indeed! Congratulations!
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