Away In a Cruise Ship

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July 23,2023 8,45 am

Away in a cruise ship With me are two friends Our rare fellowship We wish there‘s no end We reminisce the past When we're still colleagues Time keeps flying too fast But we keep our jigs Away in a cruise ship Hugs, eat, dance and sing Enjoying best friendship Lengthy and lasting A great mom and god-moms Apart at foreign lands In just two hours of jams Share the best we can Away in a cruise ship We rush our short bond Take photos on best trip Superb scenes around City lights everywhere From second deck’s views Sailing on the river We wish we’ll be crews

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2023 7:31:00 PM

I loved the ONE and only cruise I took many years ago. Did you get to do more than one? Sweet one!

Len Gasun
Date: 7/25/2023 7:41:00 PM

Hello my dear poet friend Andrea. So far this is the first cruise I have experienced. Many invitations were given before from friends just living close by here but I turned them down because we're always jamming everywhere like malls and other places. But this time, I went for the sake of my friend from another country. So happy you'd one before. Thanks for reading my aide-memoire my dear poet friend Andrea. Blessings. Hugs

Valsa George

Date: 7/24/2023 5:33:00 AM

A voyage in a cruise ship with bosom friends can be an exhilarating experience got only very rarely. Though the trip is over, the beautiful memories last for ever. Lovely poem dear Len.

Len Gasun
Date: 7/24/2023 5:43:00 AM

You're right my dear poet friend Valsa. Thanks for reading this aide-memoire of mine and your uplifting words. Blessings to you always. Have a wonderful day! Hugs

Len Gasun

Date: 7/22/2023 7:35:00 PM

Not for the contest. This is a poem to remember a great moment with my friends (padrinas-kumares) last June 1, 2023 at 7-9pm. They were my former colleagues in Paranaque for 11 yrs, now working in Indonesia and Thailand (far from me). I’ve not seen the one from Indonesia for 20 years and 5 years for my friend in Thailand. We’d a great fun and time in the Asiatic Cruise.