Len Gasun Poet Rhyme

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July  23,2023   8,45 am   

Away In a Cruise Ship

Away in a cruise ship
With me are two friends
Our rare fellowship
We wish there‘s no end

We reminisce the past
When we're still colleagues
Time keeps flying too fast
But we keep our jigs

Away in a cruise ship
Hugs, eat, dance and sing
Enjoying best friendship
Lengthy and lasting

A great mom and god-moms
Apart at foreign lands
In just two hours of jams
Share the best we can

Away in a cruise ship
We rush our short bond
Take photos on best trip
Superb scenes around

City lights everywhere
From second deck’s views
Sailing on the river
We wish we’ll be crews

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Andrea Dietrich July 25, 2023 at 7:31 PM I loved the ONE and only cruise I took many years ago. Did you get to do more than one? Sweet one! Len Gasun July 25, 2023 at 7:41 PM Hello my dear poet friend Andrea. So far this is the first cruise I have experienced. Many invitations were given before from friends just living close by here but I turned them down because we're always jamming everywhere like malls and other places. But this time, I went for the sake of my friend from another country. So happy you'd one before. Thanks for reading my aide-memoire my dear poet friend Andrea. Blessings. Hugs

Valsa George July 24, 2023 at 5:33 AM A voyage in a cruise ship with bosom friends can be an exhilarating experience got only very rarely. Though the trip is over, the beautiful memories last for ever. Lovely poem dear Len. Len Gasun July 24, 2023 at 5:43 AM You're right my dear poet friend Valsa. Thanks for reading this aide-memoire of mine and your uplifting words. Blessings to you always. Have a wonderful day! Hugs

Len Gasun July 22, 2023 at 7:35 PM Not for the contest. This is a poem to remember a great moment with my friends (padrinas-kumares) last June 1, 2023 at 7-9pm. They were my former colleagues in Paranaque for 11 yrs, now working in Indonesia and Thailand (far from me). I’ve not seen the one from Indonesia for 20 years and 5 years for my friend in Thailand. We’d a great fun and time in the Asiatic Cruise.