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Awash

The mica-flecked granite outcroppings loom,
releasing bits of themselves randomly 
sparkling, as they fall, in felted-light they bloom. 

Blasted cliffs, yet brazen, they rise without decree,
unconcerned with the maples, and the birch,
releasing bits of themselves randomly. 

An ashen, sulking, sky hides the eagle's perch 
and softens all the jagged edges of the scene
unconcerned with the maples, and the birch.

A collage of layers blends all color in between
each angle decomposing in the rain,
and softens all the jagged edges of the scene.

Within the fog the distant mountain's strain
bruised in shades of lavender and forest green,
each angle decomposing in the rain.

A watercolor tableau where, unforeseen,
the mica-flecked granite outcroppings loom,
bruised in shades of lavender and forest green
sparkling as they fall, in felted-light they bloom. 



1/4/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ward Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 3:03 AM
Such a pretty poem, Debbie - one I will return to. Best wishes, Alicia
A   Avatar
January 11, 2015 at 9:19 PM
Congrats...PD
Walker  Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 3:37 PM
Congratulations Debbie on your win with such a beautiful poem... Verlena
Lamoureux Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 9:06 AM
I enjoyed rereading this one Debbie. I still appreciate that you helped me become comfortable with this form.
Sergi Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 9:00 AM
Hi Debbie: A beautiful flowing poem set to music.
Meier-Hans Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 6:38 PM
Your poem is a masterpiece of poetry Debbie. Everything brought to life with your words. Well deserved top win. Congratulations and thank you so much for my placing in your contest. I am honoured to be chosen by such a wonderful poet as yourself.
Callus Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 4:27 PM
What a lovely and captivating Terzanelle, Debbie!! Wonderful imagery....splashed with bold strokes on poetic canvas. Well done and congrats! Have a lovely weekend. // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 3:45 AM
Wow Debbie, I certainly see why this poem took top placement. An amazing and stirring piece. Congrats on your big win!
Kendrick Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 11:44 AM
Enjoyed reading your work about the picture of such a beautiful fall scene..Expertly written..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 9:33 AM
I can see why this one was chosen, congratulations Debbie.
Canama Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 2:54 AM
Wow! This is a heart-warming and amazing nature poem. Congrats, Debbie!
A. Sharma Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 11:11 PM
Creative masterpiece Debbie! Congrats on top win! Wish u a very happy n prosperous new year 2015!
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 11:00 PM
Joseph got it right. this is masterful, Debs. Glad to see it "top of the heap! BIG congrats.
May Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 10:32 PM
A masterful write Debbie....Congrats on a great win...
Richards Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 5:32 PM
So wonderful, the personalization, and unconcern of the cliffs, the sulking sky, bruised mountains..... just brilliantly voiced ! Lovely poem !! And again, a big thank you for always being an inspiration, and your encouragement, whether it be a contest you sponsor, or just a comment! Thank you!
Lawless Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 5:14 PM
Debbie, I have wrestled a few terzanelle to the parchment...no easy feat. Congrats on a wonderful poem and a deserved win.
Sietesantos Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Debbie, this masterpiece deserves to be at the top of the class! The imagery is incredible - you are indeed a true artist! Congratulations on your superlative win! Warmest regards. Pandita.
Haight Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 11:02 AM
Hi Debbie, I enjoyed reading your lovely poem and want to congratulate your on your well-deserved 1st Place win! You painted a beautiful picture of Fall. Hugs, Sandra
Yvonne Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 9:22 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win.
Yvonne Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 9:20 AM
A masterful write beautifully composed. The imagery is stunning. A fav for me!
Mehta Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 9:11 AM
The most I enjoyed is the imagery in the poem, congrats on the win, Deb. Light and love. Thanks for my placement in your recent contest
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 8:53 AM
lovely Debbie. :) Congrats on the win!
Squyres Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Brilliant !! If I closed my eyes and someone read this to me... I would see it so clearly come to life and smell the decomposition of the leaves. You have taken me to Autumn again .... Bravo on your win !!
Adenuga Ayanjompe Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 8:48 AM
Beautifully written, Debbie, what I saw I know that you definitely deserve the position you were awarded, congrats, continue like this and you might become a nobel laureate
Guzzi Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 10:18 AM
How kind you are formed poetry is not widely accepted in the 21st century, it falls in the larger category of RHYME. It's a free verse world. I would like simply to feed myself writing which may be a harder task that achieving a laureat?
Allison Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 7:37 AM
So beautifully penned Debbie many congrats:-) hugs Jan
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