Awash

An endless sequence marching to the shore,
the repetitious, mesmerizing sea.
The shoulders, tensed, relaxing all the more
as wave on wave come rolling over me.

Beyond the bar, the deeper hues of blue
turn emerald as they pass across the sand;
a frothy white appears as if on cue,
and rides, rambunctious, all the way to land.

A sound machine so marvelously made,
enraptured, I am caught up in a trance.
A symphony, with crashing symbols, played;
the waves complete a choreographed dance.

The soothing sound compounds its sweet effects;
I breathlessly anticipate the next.

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for the 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 4 Poetry Contest
sponsored by Mark Toney
Written 06/19/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 11:38 AM
LOVE this one. One of my faves on the winner list I am seeing . Belated congrats
Goldsmith Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 8:16 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Love your line, "A symphony, with crashing symbols, played; the waves complete a choreographed dance." So very true. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
Kyser Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 3:09 PM
Thanks, Paula. Have a blessed day as well
Watt Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 10:25 PM
Jeff, I too am enchanted by the sounds and repetition of the waves and find the ocean mesmerizing. Your poem does it justice. I especially like "the waves complete a choreographed dance", congrats on your win.
Kyser Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 2:54 AM
Thanks, John
Toney Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 8:35 PM
"Repetitious, mesmerizing ...relaxing." Jeff, your sonnet is a beautiful description of the therapeutic effects the sea can have on your mind and body. Your poem is also "awash" with beautiful metaphors. Congratulations on your win on Mile 4 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Mile 5 has already started!
Kyser Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 2:53 AM
Thanks, Mark! It was a good trip, but I am glad to be home in my “mountains”. Looking forward to more marathon miles
Hankins Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 6:15 PM
I really like this one, Jeff. Beautiful images reminiscent of hours I've lain on a beach listening to the "symphony." A very, very good write.
Kyser Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 6:21 PM
Thanks, Milt. I’m resonating with some aspects of the trip…
Ibeh Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 3:18 PM
An amazing sonnet, Jeff:-) I enjoyed reading it.
Kyser Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 3:39 PM
Thanks,Edward!
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