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Awaking a Thirst

awaking a thirst, filling me from above with whispers of unforgotten love; the pounding of drums as your name lingers on mine own lips displacing rainbow sweet hues. most wonders touch swirl round mine own fingers yearning the music, I choose not to lose. how many times did I gaze on thy face? in mine own daydreams? When spent sun was fiercer; awaking a thirst, filling me from above with whispers of unforgotten love. before then night lapse in dank vesture of lace mine wane smile died, with memories dear sir. brush flitter, round musical full score. ivory fingers purposeless upon awaking a thirst, filling me from above with whispers of unforgotten love. my ebony frame, asking for much more, sweet release, mine demise, a distant yawn. now I still steal, moments taking pleasure, devouring the air that waltz around me, awaking a thirst, filling me from above with whispers of unforgotten love. wisp of earth fragrant charm I treasure, staring at the heaven it uses to be awaking a thirst, filling me from above with whispers of unforgotten love. 5/14/2021 'Say It Again' Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula

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Date: 5/19/2021 3:03:00 PM
Unforgotten loves have to power to evoke such sweet memories. Your poetry is flourishing under the beautiful lamp of remembered love. Much love to you xo
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Date: 5/19/2021 5:00:00 AM
This is a beautiful lyric, Eve, congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 5/18/2021 12:55:00 PM
I see you won. THAT IS AWESOME. Congrats, Eve.
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Date: 5/18/2021 11:25:00 AM
Love and memories to create a "thirst" Eve. Perfectly described in your strong and powerful images. This lyric just flows! Congratulations on your win! Hugs :D
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Date: 5/18/2021 5:58:00 AM
WOW! 'Awaking a thirst.....of unforgotten love. to touch chore of heart. Congrats to win.
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Date: 5/18/2021 5:03:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/17/2021 5:22:00 AM
I love the whispers of unforgotten love!! The theme song of the heart! Lovely!
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Date: 5/15/2021 3:55:00 PM
Eve, this is really gorgeous writing. I hope his contest is not premier because I know many people have submitted such lovely entries and it would be a shame to not see all of them on the list. I hope to see you on the winner list. Truly beautiful.
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Date: 5/15/2021 10:03:00 AM
Hi Eve, I love this gem, and have to fave it, best wishes for the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/14/2021 11:30:00 AM
- What a wonderful lyric poem, Eve :) - Good luck in the contest :) -Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/14/2021 10:55:00 AM
A wonderful write Eve, best wishes
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Date: 5/14/2021 2:50:00 AM
You can say it again. Such a lovely tribute and gracious poem. Hugs.
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