Awakenings

Written in tribute to William Wordsworths 'Daffodils'

Earth’s mantle slowly turns from white to green
As born of winter’s womb new life begins
Shoots grow, restoring colours to the scene
To herald Mother Earth’s awakening,
Who on arising casts off winter’s throw
Enlivened by the warmth of the sun’s first glow

Her wakening is welcomed by the trees
Who’ve stood for so long bleak against the sky
They feel her sweet caress within the breeze
That spirals ‘tween each branch as she goes by,
Boughs which once were barren, cold, and grey
Now blossom, as within her arms they lay.

The plenitude of Mother Earth abounds
As nature’s kisses fall in April showers
Rejuvenating seeds, laying dormant underground
Bringing forth a myriad of blossoming flowers,
Land once covered by a veil of white
Is now a mass of colour, fresh and bright

Fields and woodland brim with new creation
Who give thanks to Mother Earth for all her gifts,
Birds upon the wing sing exultations
As winter’s deep depression finally lifts
The last remaining shadows, eclipsed now by the sun
A sonorous proclamation that spring, at last, has come.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Horsman Avatar
December 30, 2012 at 4:04 AM
this is a wonderful tribute, Janette, just browsing and found this gem, from four years ago.. love this amazing poem.... happy New Year...
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December 6, 2009 at 7:55 PM
saw you mention this in blog! Janette! yes!.... this is a beautiful flowing poem, filled with gorgeous images! jimbo
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October 30, 2009 at 1:55 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Janette.Rgds Brian
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October 2, 2009 at 11:58 AM
Janette, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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September 25, 2009 at 10:26 AM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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September 24, 2009 at 12:02 PM
Jeanette, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition >> James
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September 24, 2009 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Janette. Love, Carol
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August 4, 2009 at 10:44 PM
Jeanette congratulations on having your poetry featured this week - God Bless, MJ
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August 3, 2009 at 4:27 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being selected to be featured this week . Love, Carol
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August 3, 2009 at 4:43 AM
Congratulations on being featured Jeanette, excellent poem>>James
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May 24, 2009 at 11:17 AM
Ah I love it so well done! Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Laura :)
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May 23, 2009 at 11:40 PM
Janette, congrats on your feature...Raul
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May 23, 2009 at 4:43 PM
Congrats Janette on "Awakenings" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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May 22, 2009 at 2:12 PM
Janette, You have written a magnificent poem here. God bless. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep writing, Love and Hugs, Dane
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May 21, 2009 at 7:41 AM
I love the passion with which you write, this piece is awesome. Great you .Congrats on your wonderful poem being featured this week. love Leke
Fraser Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 3:00 PM
Excellent poem Janette, awesome picture you painted with your featured poem, James
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May 18, 2009 at 3:24 PM
i have enjoyed this poem and Congratulations on your poem featured this week!
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May 18, 2009 at 6:07 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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May 18, 2009 at 3:39 AM
Congratulations and enjoy your honor. More power and success. Ernilando
Stacey Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 5:14 AM
i just wanted to let you know i really liked this and the ease with which you built the picture is great
Mckenzie Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 4:05 PM
Excellent story revealing springs arrival so well done! I loved the strong use of imagery and feel you gave this whole piece Laura :)
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April 20, 2009 at 6:41 AM
Beautiful. Pls enter it in contest re. spring. All the best.
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