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Cool overnight rains, bear a fresh burst of spring, Peach and pink hues grace gardens, youthful playing! Pale lemony sunshine, at warmth's golden beginning, And everywhere you roam, there's a novel happening. Pink butterflies in circles, a bronzed loop de loop, And masses of cherry blossoms, preceding red fruit. The grass so green, pearl dewdrops gone one by one, Like the shadows that flee, in feverish awe of the sun!

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Date: 7/22/2021 5:27:00 PM
'loop de loop... one by one.' Love the rhythm and flow in this vibrant celebration of the world around us, Evelyn. Thanks, Gershon
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/22/2021 7:42:00 PM
You are very welcome, Gershon. Thank your very much for your kind regard. It's nice to know you enjoyed this. Have a nice evening, Evelyn
Date: 7/22/2021 4:57:00 PM
Wonderful poem, very well penned with great imagery and interesting hues. Kindest regards dear Evelyn
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/22/2021 7:44:00 PM
Thank you very much, Lasaad. Your appreciation is a delight. Best of wishes, my friend.
Date: 7/22/2021 10:48:00 AM
- A beauty, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/22/2021 10:55:00 AM
Thank you very much. :) Blessings and hugs, Evelyn
Date: 7/22/2021 3:53:00 AM
Great imagery and great colors. A superb poem.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/22/2021 10:56:00 AM
I extend my deepest thanks, friend. :)
Date: 7/22/2021 2:54:00 AM
You made me hungry with your colors and descriptions...Well done.
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Date: 7/22/2021 11:00:00 AM
A good appetite is healthy, so I'm glad. Thank you very much.
Date: 7/21/2021 6:53:00 PM
Great verse, flow, and well described imagery. PS ,I am not sure if you know that the Nursery Rhyme book is out on Amazon. Hugs Eve
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/21/2021 8:33:00 PM
Thank you so much for your valued response to this verse, Eve. Actually, I had no idea that the Nursery Rhyme book was out. Soupmail, please. Hugs, Evelyn
Date: 7/21/2021 4:52:00 PM
What a lovely image. I forgot for a brief moment how hot it is outside. Beautifully penned, A fav for me. Have a great day my friend.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/21/2021 5:11:00 PM
I extend my my deepest thanks for your inspiring words and fav. Enjoy your evening, my friend. :D

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