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Awakenings

Cool overnight rains, bear a fresh burst of spring,
Peach and pink hues grace gardens, youthful playing!
Pale lemony sunshine, at warmth's golden beginning,
And everywhere you roam, there's a novel happening.

Pink butterflies in circles, a bronzed loop de loop,
And masses of cherry blossoms, preceding red fruit.
The grass so green, pearl dewdrops gone one by one,
Like the shadows that flee, in feverish awe of the sun!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Wolf Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 5:27 PM
'loop de loop... one by one.' Love the rhythm and flow in this vibrant celebration of the world around us, Evelyn. Thanks, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 7:42 PM
You are very welcome, Gershon. Thank your very much for your kind regard. It's nice to know you enjoyed this. Have a nice evening, Evelyn
Poet Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 4:57 PM
Wonderful poem, very well penned with great imagery and interesting hues. Kindest regards dear Evelyn
Buehler Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 7:44 PM
Thank you very much, Lasaad. Your appreciation is a delight. Best of wishes, my friend.
Andresen Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 10:48 AM
- A beauty, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buehler Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 10:55 AM
Thank you very much. :) Blessings and hugs, Evelyn
Buhagiar Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 3:53 AM
Great imagery and great colors. A superb poem.
Buehler Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 10:56 AM
I extend my deepest thanks, friend. :)
Michael Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 2:54 AM
You made me hungry with your colors and descriptions...Well done.
Buehler Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 11:00 AM
A good appetite is healthy, so I'm glad. Thank you very much.
Roper Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 6:53 PM
Great verse, flow, and well described imagery. PS ,I am not sure if you know that the Nursery Rhyme book is out on Amazon. Hugs Eve
Buehler Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 8:33 PM
Thank you so much for your valued response to this verse, Eve. Actually, I had no idea that the Nursery Rhyme book was out. Soupmail, please. Hugs, Evelyn
Mchattie Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 4:52 PM
What a lovely image. I forgot for a brief moment how hot it is outside. Beautifully penned, A fav for me. Have a great day my friend.
Buehler Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 5:11 PM
I extend my my deepest thanks for your inspiring words and fav. Enjoy your evening, my friend. :D
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