Awakening Sky

As the golden ball ascends
At the crack of dawn
The magical sky radiates
Hues of yellow, orange and red


Original Poem: Waiting for Light
Date: 05/31/2021
Liberum Divisa 6 Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Brul Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 1:46 PM
Back to fav this! A real gem!
Proxenos Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 12:49 PM
Hope this wins my friend - so creative, exactly as it really is! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer..
Brul Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 2:06 PM
What a stunning imagery! Superb!
Alex Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 10:45 AM
Natual Coordination.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 1:30 AM
Lovely extract. Best for a win.
Poet Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 2:46 PM
Golden ball, that’s a wonderful imagery to the skies and colors, I enjoyed reading this well penned poem. Blessings and regards Anitha
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 11:39 AM
Hello Anitha, I like the way you described the awakening sky. Enjoy your day my friend.
Theraven Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 11:11 AM
Anitha, Very nice skies you've brought to life in these shades. -Richard
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