Awakening

a solarium
seems to cov'r the whole forest
sun awakens nature
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 2, 2012 at 6:09 PM
beautiful imagery here Carol. the idea is simply sublime
Pardi Jr Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 5:34 PM
thanks for the compliment.i find your poems on nature totally refreshing and pure. congratulations!
K. Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 11:42 AM
And what a beautiful way to wake up to the sun! Thanks for all your congrats, congrats as well to you on all your wins, Carol!
Novotny Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 11:27 AM
A most nimble piece. Love your haiku. - Chuck
Debole Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 5:18 PM
Beautifully said in so few words.
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February 24, 2012 at 3:22 PM
I do love Haiku,s , and i enjoyed this , thank you Carol , Hugs and best wishes , Declan xxx
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February 24, 2012 at 9:39 AM
Whether your from nearby or the other side of town. You're sure to appreciate the poems of Carol Brown! Her poetry brings a heartfelt smile... And reading her poetry makes it worth the while!
Minardi Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 8:14 AM
A beautiful haiku. Sun awakens nature.. :)
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February 23, 2012 at 2:19 PM
Nice words............George
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February 23, 2012 at 12:35 PM
This is a beautiful write my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed every part of this poem! I love how you put all the sun in the forest to wake it all up, beautifully done! This is a wonderfully written poem Carol
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