Awakening

a solarium seems to cov'r the whole forest sun awakens nature

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M.I.A .

Date: 3/2/2012 6:09:00 PM

beautiful imagery here Carol. the idea is simply sublime

Anthony Pardi Jr

Date: 2/27/2012 5:34:00 PM

thanks for the compliment.i find your poems on nature totally refreshing and pure. congratulations!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/26/2012 11:42:00 AM

And what a beautiful way to wake up to the sun! Thanks for all your congrats, congrats as well to you on all your wins, Carol!

Chuck Novotny

Date: 2/26/2012 11:27:00 AM

A most nimble piece. Love your haiku. - Chuck

Gail Debole

Date: 2/25/2012 5:18:00 PM

Beautifully said in so few words.

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 2/24/2012 3:22:00 PM

I do love Haiku,s , and i enjoyed this , thank you Carol , Hugs and best wishes , Declan xxx

Jim Pemberton

Date: 2/24/2012 9:39:00 AM

Whether your from nearby or the other side of town. You're sure to appreciate the poems of Carol Brown! Her poetry brings a heartfelt smile... And reading her poetry makes it worth the while!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 2/24/2012 8:14:00 AM

A beautiful haiku. Sun awakens nature.. :)

George Aul

Date: 2/23/2012 2:19:00 PM

Nice words............George

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/23/2012 12:35:00 PM

This is a beautiful write my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed every part of this poem! I love how you put all the sun in the forest to wake it all up, beautifully done! This is a wonderfully written poem Carol