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Below is the poem entitled Awakening which was written by poet Carol Sunshine Brown. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The poem is below.


a solarium
seems to cov'r the whole forest
sun awakens nature

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 3/2/2012 6:09:00 PM
beautiful imagery here Carol. the idea is simply sublime
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:34:00 PM
thanks for the compliment.i find your poems on nature totally refreshing and pure. congratulations!
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Date: 2/26/2012 11:42:00 AM
And what a beautiful way to wake up to the sun! Thanks for all your congrats, congrats as well to you on all your wins, Carol!
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Date: 2/26/2012 11:27:00 AM
A most nimble piece. Love your haiku. - Chuck
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Date: 2/25/2012 5:18:00 PM
Beautifully said in so few words.
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Date: 2/24/2012 3:22:00 PM
I do love Haiku,s , and i enjoyed this , thank you Carol , Hugs and best wishes , Declan xxx
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Date: 2/24/2012 9:39:00 AM
Whether your from nearby or the other side of town. You're sure to appreciate the poems of Carol Brown! Her poetry brings a heartfelt smile... And reading her poetry makes it worth the while!
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Date: 2/24/2012 8:14:00 AM
A beautiful haiku. Sun awakens nature.. :)
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Date: 2/23/2012 2:19:00 PM
Nice words............George
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Date: 2/23/2012 12:35:00 PM
This is a beautiful write my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed every part of this poem! I love how you put all the sun in the forest to wake it all up, beautifully done! This is a wonderfully written poem Carol
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