Awakening

Startling sensations, steaming in my core Endorphins, eager to awaken Novelty I long to explore Stirs mind and body, aching Unsettling urges rise Anticipating Lovemaking cue Imploring Touch of You February 2, 2021
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Rodrigues Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 4:55 AM
Very nice, Margarita! Congratulations!
Puddifoot Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 8:18 AM
i like this - there's a lot packed into such a compact poem: acrostic, syllabic form, rhyme and alliteration; the last three lines close the poem well - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
Lillico  Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 1:12 PM
Thanks for having me :) M.
Mitra Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 7:52 AM
Nice... I really liked the flow....Congrats on your win Margarita :)
Lillico  Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 1:12 PM
Thank you! M.
Allison Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 8:44 AM
beautifully sensual Margarita:-) hugs Jan xx
Lillico  Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 9:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. M.
Gondolf Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 6:39 AM
Wow, Maggie, what an awakening! This is very nicely crafted. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
Lillico  Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 9:01 AM
Those contests bring the best in us:) M.
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