Awakened By a Whisper

Peacefully I sleep

Dreaming…
	Relaxing…
		Experiencing…
	
I’m floating gently on a stream
Feeling the sun upon my face
Tasting the cool beads of clear water on my lips
Hearing the song of an eagle soaring above
Seeing the evergreens towering over me
Smelling patchouli from within the thicket

Changing…
	Worrying…
		Panicking…

The flow now rushing
Feeling the chill of death upon my skin
Tasting the bitterness of sadness within me
Hearing my own cries
Seeing my life flash before me
Smelling the fear of all that surrounds me

A sound…
	A voice…
		A whisper…

Awakened by the sweet words of my husband

It’s okay…
	I am here…
		I love you…
			
Living in warmth, comfort, and happiness




Copyright © 2009   Lena “Lolita” Townsend
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mills Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 10:01 AM
well put together; comforting and inspiring. Lovely and safe and warm. Susan
Mason Avatar
December 6, 2009 at 2:23 PM
Beautifully done Lena!!
Culverhouse Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 5:23 PM
nicely penned, hope you are well,
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November 30, 2009 at 12:23 PM
Aww! How nice! Just lovely. Beautiful imagery that took the reader on the journey of the dream that turned nightmare, but discarded by the loving voice of your husband. Perfect ending! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem. Caroline.
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November 29, 2009 at 9:39 AM
I like the artistic presentation in this one. Good use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Keep on writing! Karen
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November 29, 2009 at 9:20 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Lena.Rgds Brian
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November 28, 2009 at 2:35 PM
smoothly delievered. great write. love and peace: james
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November 27, 2009 at 5:58 AM
Lolita u are truly blessed to have someone who cares so much.. luv your style in this poem and your words well written to enjoy.. and I so did... blessings .. luv ... happy Monday to u... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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November 26, 2009 at 9:36 AM
Took us for a fascinating little trip there, Lena! enjoyed. -Robert
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November 26, 2009 at 12:19 AM
lovely whisper indeed--Charma
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