Awakened By a Whisper

Peacefully I sleep

Dreaming…
	Relaxing…
		Experiencing…
	
I’m floating gently on a stream
Feeling the sun upon my face
Tasting the cool beads of clear water on my lips
Hearing the song of an eagle soaring above
Seeing the evergreens towering over me
Smelling patchouli from within the thicket

Changing…
	Worrying…
		Panicking…

The flow now rushing
Feeling the chill of death upon my skin
Tasting the bitterness of sadness within me
Hearing my own cries
Seeing my life flash before me
Smelling the fear of all that surrounds me

A sound…
	A voice…
		A whisper…

Awakened by the sweet words of my husband

It’s okay…
	I am here…
		I love you…
			
Living in warmth, comfort, and happiness




Copyright © 2009   Lena “Lolita” Townsend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/9/2009 10:01:00 AM
well put together; comforting and inspiring. Lovely and safe and warm. Susan
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Date: 12/6/2009 2:23:00 PM
Beautifully done Lena!!
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Date: 11/30/2009 5:23:00 PM
nicely penned, hope you are well,
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Date: 11/30/2009 12:23:00 PM
Aww! How nice! Just lovely. Beautiful imagery that took the reader on the journey of the dream that turned nightmare, but discarded by the loving voice of your husband. Perfect ending! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem. Caroline.
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Date: 11/29/2009 9:39:00 AM
I like the artistic presentation in this one. Good use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 11/29/2009 9:20:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Lena.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/28/2009 2:35:00 PM
smoothly delievered. great write. love and peace: james
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Date: 11/27/2009 5:58:00 AM
Lolita u are truly blessed to have someone who cares so much.. luv your style in this poem and your words well written to enjoy.. and I so did... blessings .. luv ... happy Monday to u... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/26/2009 9:36:00 AM
Took us for a fascinating little trip there, Lena! enjoyed. -Robert
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Date: 11/26/2009 12:19:00 AM
lovely whisper indeed--Charma
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