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Awakened

Like a chest heaving Molten Lava rising forth Its path to the Sea

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/4/2011 4:49:00 PM
Great imagery or feeling imagined from this one!
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Date: 11/25/2010 4:17:00 PM
Interesting Sharon, a path set on the go, Love it! With the best holiday wishes to you' (Lin~Ra)
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Date: 11/24/2010 4:24:00 PM
Happy Thanksgiving Day, Sharon
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Date: 11/23/2010 6:24:00 PM
Eloquently penned Sharon.. has deeper hidden meanings within the lines so beautiful luv.. enjoyed your splendid Haiku tonight ..
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Date: 11/23/2010 5:37:00 PM
enjoyed reading today.
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Date: 11/23/2010 3:42:00 PM
Hello Shar, a very hot and refreshing way to wake up,, enjoyed your poem,, Sharon,, and yes thanks for thinking my writes was funny,,i thought that myself,, Love the path your haiku is taking here. have a nice one,..p.d.
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