Awakened

Like a chest heaving Molten Lava rising forth Its path to the Sea

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 11/26/2022 9:05:00 PM

WISELY DEPICTED THE IMAGERY OF AWAKENING ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2011 4:49:00 PM

Great imagery or feeling imagined from this one!

Hathor Ammutlinra

Date: 11/25/2010 4:17:00 PM

Interesting Sharon, a path set on the go, Love it! With the best holiday wishes to you' (Lin~Ra)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/24/2010 4:24:00 PM

Happy Thanksgiving Day, Sharon

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2010 6:24:00 PM

Eloquently penned Sharon.. has deeper hidden meanings within the lines so beautiful luv.. enjoyed your splendid Haiku tonight ..

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/23/2010 5:37:00 PM

enjoyed reading today.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/23/2010 3:42:00 PM

Hello Shar, a very hot and refreshing way to wake up,, enjoyed your poem,, Sharon,, and yes thanks for thinking my writes was funny,,i thought that myself,, Love the path your haiku is taking here. have a nice one,..p.d.