Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

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Awakened

The sun's flirtatious wink woke me at dawn
I smiled, lazily stretched, and stifled a yawn
I was teased by the touch of his warm hand
The power of his refulgent torch, I understand
His golden majesty then rose to brighten the skies
greeting the morning in such a grandiose reprise

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Duke Beaufort July 4, 2025 at 8:11 AM Kin, sounds like getting up in a good mood when looking at it this way. Hope you are well and sending smiles. It's much better to have this attitude and welcoming every day as a gift!!

Deb M July 1, 2025 at 1:54 PM Such a sun touched , warm , feel good write Lin! Wish l could wake up to that every morning Ha! Debx

Sara Kendrick July 1, 2025 at 7:49 AM I enjoyed reading your work. Creative and well thought out. Thanks for sharing it with us. Way to go. Sara K Lin Lane July 1, 2025 at 7:58 AM Thanks for reading and commenting, Sara.

Jan Allison July 1, 2025 at 7:43 AM wonderful personification Lin!! hugs Jan xx Lin Lane July 1, 2025 at 7:58 AM Thanks so much, Jan.