Awakened

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a petal from a blossom falls to rest upon the earth all is carried upon the back of that which lies between

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Date: 12/5/2020 6:59:00 AM

As Count Basey said: it’s not so much the notes I play as the spaces in between. Nice observation, Vernon.

Date: 11/29/2020 11:17:00 AM

Hello Veron Witmer, as I was reading this poem, i can see the petals spread out so lovely on the ground. enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/30/2020 10:35:00 AM

Hello Vermon, thank you for the lovely comment. You made my day brighter. Enjoy your day my friend.

Vernon Witmer
Date: 11/29/2020 1:01:00 PM

Thank you Darlene, your words are like lovely petals from the beautiful blossoming of the earth.