Awaken To the Biting Wind Howls

Awaken to the biting wind howls while the sky darkened and the thunder scowls. The distance sounds of birds flock across the darkened sky. Sounds of crunching over the earth startled awake an owl to fly. Flash of lighting then the sound, sending waves of fear, a pulsing heart; lost in the darkness, of pounding rain, and gleaming darts. She slowly turned her head to shadow weaving on her darken walls from the flicker of leaves and trees obeying its calls. Lighting so humbling, thins to a slight glimmer, and starts to stumble, sounds of thunder wanes to a low grumbling rumble. The night melts away to a light blend lavender and golden grain; fresh sweet cool rain and earthy fragrance awaken again.
8/11/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pinet Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 4:58 PM
Your feelings surface and carry the emotional force behind your words. A touching and eloquent description of a special moment in nature, when the energy of life is refreshed and renewed. Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 8:07 PM
This is REALLY nice work, Eve. I love it!
Donovan Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 1:32 AM
Skillfully written in narrative and a very enjoyable poem to read!
Sivey Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 5:33 AM
This is a wonderful write Eve, such a glorious poem! You have presented a harmonious poem, full of wonder from an awesome storm, with thunder rolling and lightning splitting the sky, a fantastic piece! What an outstanding poem, Great Work!!
Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 3:01 AM
- A beautifully described poem, Eve - Reminds me of an autumn night - Nature's enormous powers - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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