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Awaken Spring

Spring did not want to appear
as winter kept her nice and warm
covered by  his coat of white
it was to comfortable to wake up
it meant work for her
she had gotten to comfortable
the trees began to bud slowly
upset with spring unwillingness
the flower bulbs peeked out
wondering what was keeping spring
the sun shone brightly to wake her
so slowly she decided enough
unwillingly she cast her warmth
upon the earthly orb
spring became awake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 7/12/2025 10:33:00 AM
This is beautiful, Phyll - I hope all is OK with you & the family. Will read more next time (I'm trying to catch up with comments)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/18/2025 9:59:00 AM
Thanks for your comment my friend. Sorry this is so late. Summer has kept me busy. Staining deck and garden plus out watching go cart racing and our coffee group keep us busy. Have a great weekend. love phyl
Date: 6/4/2025 12:37:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Awaken Spring" write. I love springtime. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/18/2025 9:57:00 AM
Thanks Paula and I am late with getting back to comments and replies. Have a great weekend. love phyl
Date: 6/4/2025 11:39:00 AM
- It was about time... finally :) - Enjoy the gifts of spring, dear Phyllis :) - A lovely poem :) - hugs
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/18/2025 9:56:00 AM
Thanks for your comment, I am so slow in getting back to the soup. Almost finished staining the deck. Raspberries need picking every day. Have a lovely weekend. love phyl

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