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Awaken Spring

Spring did not want to appear as winter kept her nice and warm covered by his coat of white it was to comfortable to wake up it meant work for her she had gotten to comfortable the trees began to bud slowly upset with spring unwillingness the flower bulbs peeked out wondering what was keeping spring the sun shone brightly to wake her so slowly she decided enough unwillingly she cast her warmth upon the earthly orb spring became awake

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Date: 7/12/2025 10:33:00 AM
This is beautiful, Phyll - I hope all is OK with you & the family. Will read more next time (I'm trying to catch up with comments)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/18/2025 9:59:00 AM
Thanks for your comment my friend. Sorry this is so late. Summer has kept me busy. Staining deck and garden plus out watching go cart racing and our coffee group keep us busy. Have a great weekend. love phyl
Date: 6/4/2025 12:37:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Awaken Spring" write. I love springtime. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/18/2025 9:57:00 AM
Thanks Paula and I am late with getting back to comments and replies. Have a great weekend. love phyl
Date: 6/4/2025 11:39:00 AM
- It was about time... finally :) - Enjoy the gifts of spring, dear Phyllis :) - A lovely poem :) - hugs
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/18/2025 9:56:00 AM
Thanks for your comment, I am so slow in getting back to the soup. Almost finished staining the deck. Raspberries need picking every day. Have a lovely weekend. love phyl

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