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Awaken By Brilliance

I awoke To see a day bright I smiled wide Wildly done And I represented life Great with brilliant heart Russell Sivey Form is Shadorma

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Don Johnson

Date: 11/13/2011 9:26:00 PM

seeing light of day so bright, a happier Russell is the sight, well done here mate keep writing some, says johnson your ole Aussie chum, orright...

Jack Horne

Date: 11/13/2011 12:53:00 PM

Clever piece - don't think I've ever tried this form before and it looks like fun

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/13/2011 7:19:00 AM

Good one..In your comments I feel a bubbly personality..Enjoyed reading this morn..Yes, I saw a scyamore that had turned totally yellow and it reminded me of Zackeus..Sara

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/13/2011 1:52:00 AM

Shadorma is a form seems to be a nice form. I am not a trained writer in form. This is my biggest reason for coming to Poetry Soup. Keep blessing us with your representation of great life and brilliant heart!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2011 8:01:00 PM

Russell,, lovely.... very lovely.... p.d.