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Awaken By Brilliance

I awoke To see a day bright I smiled wide Wildly done And I represented life Great with brilliant heart Russell Sivey Form is Shadorma

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/13/2011 9:26:00 PM
seeing light of day so bright, a happier Russell is the sight, well done here mate keep writing some, says johnson your ole Aussie chum, orright...
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Date: 11/13/2011 12:53:00 PM
Clever piece - don't think I've ever tried this form before and it looks like fun
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Date: 11/13/2011 7:19:00 AM
Good one..In your comments I feel a bubbly personality..Enjoyed reading this morn..Yes, I saw a scyamore that had turned totally yellow and it reminded me of Zackeus..Sara
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Date: 11/13/2011 1:52:00 AM
Shadorma is a form seems to be a nice form. I am not a trained writer in form. This is my biggest reason for coming to Poetry Soup. Keep blessing us with your representation of great life and brilliant heart!
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Date: 11/12/2011 8:01:00 PM
Russell,, lovely.... very lovely.... p.d.
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