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Awaken By Brilliance

I awoke
To see a day bright
I smiled wide
Wildly done
And I represented life
Great with brilliant heart

Russell Sivey

Form is Shadorma

lifeshadorma

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Don Johnson

November 13, 2011 at 9:26 PM

seeing light of day so bright, a happier Russell is the sight, well done here mate keep writing some, says johnson your ole Aussie chum, orright...

Jack Horne

November 13, 2011 at 12:53 PM

Clever piece - don't think I've ever tried this form before and it looks like fun

Sara Kendrick

November 13, 2011 at 7:19 AM

Good one..In your comments I feel a bubbly personality..Enjoyed reading this morn..Yes, I saw a scyamore that had turned totally yellow and it reminded me of Zackeus..Sara

Jslambert Mister Roboto

November 13, 2011 at 1:52 AM

Shadorma is a form seems to be a nice form. I am not a trained writer in form. This is my biggest reason for coming to Poetry Soup. Keep blessing us with your representation of great life and brilliant heart!