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Awaken Adriennes

The brighter, the flame-kiss. So holy, reborn bliss. The infill, a housing. The trumpet arousing. The oiling, the shiny-beard. Aaron’s hope, sans afeard. A lamp on, asleep ten. Awaken, Adriennes! A-grooming, He’s arrived! A dark side, some lamps revived. Then oil sought, an ocean deep. Adrienne crew, the midnight weep. A wise few, extra stored. The groom’s here! Our Savior Lord! The joyous, an inner-smile from head to crown, an eternal-while! 1/14/2021 Based on the bible’s The Parable of the Ten Virgins Matthew 25

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Date: 1/19/2021 2:02:00 AM
Very uniquely crafted from the old story; very nicely penned.
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Date: 1/16/2021 7:24:00 PM
“The groom’s here!” Wonderful and faithful.
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Date: 1/16/2021 6:48:00 AM
Moving, well-written response to the parable, Kim. Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2021 9:32:00 AM
Thank you, Janice!
Date: 1/14/2021 9:40:00 AM
I know the parable well. Hope all is going fine. I haven't heard from you lately. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2021 11:41:00 AM
I guess I hadn’t read any lately. All caught up now, my friend!

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