Awaken

Awaken. Awaken me, dear Lord, lift my self-woven veil. Release me from the projections of my mind. Lift me up Open the petals of my soul to your light. Give me faith and let me listen to the echoes of your wisdom, All the way to the sweetest corners of the earth. Reveal the faith that allows me a thousand understandings, An eternal insight. Let me not question your will. Let truth be my guide, My gateway to your heaven. Inside I hear you. I begin to decipher the intricacy of your math, A formula, to show me I am you and you are me. Awaken me my dear Lord and unfold my destiny.

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Stephan McBride

Date: 10/23/2022 8:52:00 AM

I love it , may the Lord continue to guide, comfort, and use his new creation in you , love ya

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2015 11:32:00 PM

Sophie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 5/31/2015 7:38:00 AM

Sophie, u will do okay, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Sophie Jama
Date: 5/31/2015 9:18:00 AM

That is so great, thanks for the welcome SKAT. Looking forward to reading some of your work!

Sophie Jama

Date: 5/31/2015 5:10:00 AM

I do not have formal training in poetry but am planning on taking classes. Any thoughts or feedback to help me grow most welcome! I wrote this as I feel that I'm on a spiritual journey to an awakening.