"awake From My Dream'

There is a noise I hear lightly in my head...
Is it the wind or a creature near my bed...
My eyes open slightly to the pitter patter 
of raindrops on my sill...
I roll over and pull the blanket up to cover
this evening chill...
Now I'm up with my mind still in a dream...
Lay my head back down and still I can see 
the moon's distant beam...
The clock ticks by as another hour fall's to 
the side...
I close my eyes and drift away , for another
dream I will ride...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Neels Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 1:07 PM
Unless it was a nightmare then I'd have to stay awake till the morning :) Enjoyed tc Wilma
Hales Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 2:50 AM
Michael ...You have out done yourself with this ... Dream I will ride is perfect !!!! sarah x (my little comp with doc is doing well up to num 7 please see what you think on his and mine !!! Hes making it a hard contest lolol Dont tell him i said that ha ha ) have a good day x
Byrne Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 9:12 PM
very interesting!
Mehta Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 6:50 PM
Awakening from one dream to dream another. Well penned, Michael
Kendrick Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 4:09 PM
Very expressive and descriptive write that you have penned in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace