Awake

LIKE a demon's sleep, i could rest myself
being a bird to fly for the heavens sake,
i could flow the world like river itself,
holding my breath upon the forsaken breeze of faith,
i could let my hope awake.....


like a blind sees, i could feel the world myself
being a shadow to follow, where the truth take
i could create the heaven like the god himself
feeling the clusters of soul in nothingness,
i could let the cold of pain awake....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A   Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 9:50 PM
Jaanam, Congratulations with your awesome winning free verse poem... xox~ LINDA
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May 28, 2013 at 6:54 PM
congrats on your win in the contest. take care cory
Morrison Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 6:45 PM
Lovely piece! Kim
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May 20, 2013 at 9:15 AM
thanks all of you, for your comments
A  Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 9:40 PM
this is a nice poem, CONGRATS!! SKAT
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May 20, 2013 at 9:14 AM
THANK U s.k.a.t
A   Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 8:36 PM
Congratulations with your impressive winning word play poem, ... Take Care <3 xox <3 LINDA
Pokhrel Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 9:16 AM
thank you ..
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May 18, 2013 at 1:32 PM
Congrats on your win. AO
Morrison Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 7:12 AM
Great write thanks for submitting Kim
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May 20, 2013 at 9:14 AM
thank you too..
Sibanda Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 12:38 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem.
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