Awake

A soft face tickle Whispered breath sounds in my ear A precious alarm Kitty's face in mine - so dear Eager to be fed - that's clear 5/18/21 For Andrea Dietrich's Tankacrostic contest

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/2/2021 9:07:00 PM

So endearing + heart warming for all we animal lovers. Well penned! Best wishes, Brian

Howard Kerr

Date: 6/17/2021 3:13:00 AM

Hello Kim, A first place selection for this first class entry. Thanks for your comment on “Dream” Howard

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:32:00 PM

Thank you, Howard!

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 6/15/2021 10:08:00 PM

Tickling like cat's whiskers, hilarious Tanka, acrostic as well... and the recipe reaches to the crest to win first place, congrats

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:31:00 PM

Thank you, Aniruddha!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/11/2021 12:39:00 PM

Delightful misdirection Kim. Such a cool tanka! Congratulations on your win! Blessings. Hope yuou get to sleep in this weekend.

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:30:00 PM

Thank you, Sam!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/8/2021 9:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A cute write and way to wake up. Enjoy your win with blessings............

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:30:00 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/8/2021 4:16:00 AM

Back with Congrats!!! Many prayers for your good... love, Gina

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:30:00 PM

Thank you, Gina!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/7/2021 4:16:00 PM

what a cute poem, many congrats Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:29:00 PM

Thank you, Jan!

Carol Mitra

Date: 6/6/2021 10:35:00 PM

So cute....my son has a cat and she does the exact same thing :) Congrats dear Kim on your top win...much love Carol.

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:28:00 PM

Thank you, Carol!

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/6/2021 8:25:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:28:00 PM

Thank you, Beata!

Jcb Brul

Date: 6/6/2021 4:35:00 PM

So cute!!!! Congratulations dear Kim.

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:28:00 PM

Thank you, JCB!

Terry Flood

Date: 6/6/2021 2:59:00 PM

Of course, if someone’s already fed kitty, that whole experience is less savoury. Crab n pilchard breath... yuk. Congratulations on a deserved win, Kim. Terry

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:27:00 PM

That would be yuk indeed! Thank you for your comment, Terry!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/6/2021 2:21:00 PM

Your works are on Top. Always. Best. Congratulations!

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:26:00 PM

Thank you, Christuraj!

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/6/2021 12:58:00 PM

Hi Kim, This is adorable. Congratulations on your top win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:26:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis!