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A soft face tickle Whispered breath sounds in my ear A precious alarm Kitty's face in mine - so dear Eager to be fed - that's clear 5/18/21 For Andrea Dietrich's Tankacrostic contest

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Date: 7/2/2021 9:07:00 PM
So endearing + heart warming for all we animal lovers. Well penned! Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 6/17/2021 3:13:00 AM
Hello Kim, A first place selection for this first class entry. Thanks for your comment on “Dream” Howard
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:32:00 PM
Thank you, Howard!
Date: 6/15/2021 10:08:00 PM
Tickling like cat's whiskers, hilarious Tanka, acrostic as well... and the recipe reaches to the crest to win first place, congrats
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:31:00 PM
Thank you, Aniruddha!
Date: 6/11/2021 12:39:00 PM
Delightful misdirection Kim. Such a cool tanka! Congratulations on your win! Blessings. Hope yuou get to sleep in this weekend.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:30:00 PM
Thank you, Sam!
Date: 6/8/2021 9:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A cute write and way to wake up. Enjoy your win with blessings............
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:30:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 6/8/2021 4:16:00 AM
Back with Congrats!!! Many prayers for your good... love, Gina
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:30:00 PM
Thank you, Gina!
Date: 6/7/2021 4:16:00 PM
what a cute poem, many congrats Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:29:00 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Date: 6/6/2021 10:35:00 PM
So cute....my son has a cat and she does the exact same thing :) Congrats dear Kim on your top win...much love Carol.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:28:00 PM
Thank you, Carol!
Date: 6/6/2021 8:25:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:28:00 PM
Thank you, Beata!
Date: 6/6/2021 4:35:00 PM
So cute!!!! Congratulations dear Kim.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:28:00 PM
Thank you, JCB!
Date: 6/6/2021 2:59:00 PM
Of course, if someone’s already fed kitty, that whole experience is less savoury. Crab n pilchard breath... yuk. Congratulations on a deserved win, Kim. Terry
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:27:00 PM
That would be yuk indeed! Thank you for your comment, Terry!
Date: 6/6/2021 2:21:00 PM
Your works are on Top. Always. Best. Congratulations!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:26:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Date: 6/6/2021 12:58:00 PM
Hi Kim, This is adorable. Congratulations on your top win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:26:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis!
Date: 6/6/2021 11:56:00 AM
Meow meow!!! My favorite. It was about a cat but it was very creatively penned. BIG CONGRATS for first place in my contest, Kim
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 4:26:00 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for my placement! I can't believe I haven't responded to your comment before now. Sorry!
Date: 5/22/2021 6:28:00 PM
Wonderful... Meow... Ann
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/26/2021 9:11:00 AM
Thank you, Ann!
Date: 5/19/2021 8:09:00 PM
Really cute, Kim:)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/20/2021 2:48:00 PM
Thank you, Jo!
Date: 5/19/2021 5:41:00 AM
Adorable. I love it. God bless you always, dear poetess. Love, Gina
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/20/2021 2:47:00 PM
Thank you, Gina!
Date: 5/19/2021 1:09:00 AM
Cute. We must take care of our pets.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/20/2021 2:47:00 PM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 5/18/2021 12:38:00 PM
This is charming and delightful, Kim!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/20/2021 2:47:00 PM
Thank you, Ilene!
Date: 5/18/2021 11:35:00 AM
A good tanka-acrostic Kim, I enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/20/2021 2:47:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Date: 5/18/2021 10:35:00 AM
A lovely way to be woken up Kim, good luck in the contest. Tom
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/20/2021 2:46:00 PM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 5/18/2021 9:59:00 AM
Sweet. Nice Acrostic. I know what that is like :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/20/2021 2:46:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 5/18/2021 9:22:00 AM
Good one, Kim!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/20/2021 2:46:00 PM
Thank you, Milton!